Billionaire with System - Reviews

This story is progressing nicely with all the intriguing developments of Yao Ying and Yao Ling. The two main protagonists’ characters are written well although I find that the author made Yao Ying into a man who’s too fixated on *** and is overly jealous. There’s a time and place for acts of love, yet he’s constantly finding ways to ‘eat tofu’ from his wife. If I’m Yao Ling, I’ll probably be so stressed and upset to be just taken for *** object. I hope that this mission will give the readers more actions and less of Yao Ying’s clumsy attempts to seduce his wife. I often skipped chapters of Yao Ying’s lascivious acts of seducing Yao Ling and move on to the story itself.

Just started and cant stop reading. Very intriguing. The plot and character development is amazing so far. I would really live to read more. Keep updating author!!

he was introduced as billions of years old, cold aloof god. but he talks way to much, and speaks many unnecessary things, 15 chapters in his 'cold' charecter is already breaking, and the story is already progressing to fast, I would be surprised is the emperor of the kingdom came down next chapter. two peerless beauties were generated out of no where,, just cause no doubt for smut reason which also brings the story down a bit. but the main problems as I said are. cold personality breaking, story moving way too quickly, and too much unessarcary speech on the mcs part. oh and too many random long drawn out info dumps.

- World background is the same as every other novel out there.- MC is blind and acts without having any substance to back his actions ( ex: if some one cuts you on the road with a car twice your cars size [like a truck], do you try to hit the truck just to satisfy petty emotions?) <- Well the MC would!- The author forces a lot of the interactions the MC has with the outside world (For example a side character will do something just so the MC can react to it in a certain way [aka brainless side characters]).MC and world building are unoriginal and just horrendous in general. I gave 5 star to uploading speed since I don't know what the speed actually is :)- While not a lot the translator also messes up names once or twice.

I was reading it honestly n it got me hooked lol...i really liked d plot...mayb some editing here n there but it just works fine...recommended

The cover is something I immediately notice, in a good way. The summary and content are really good and the long chapters keep you from getting bored. Overall a good book, great job author!

The grammar definitely needs improvements, and the choices of the characters felt stupid, but that's okay, as long as you actually improve it will be good.

Blake makes his way towards Stephanie and crouches down by her head. He looks at her as if he was trying to solve the mysteries of the world. A hint of jealousy passed through me when he started to smooth her tangled hair, making her purr and give me a side glance. But then I immediately feel stupid for feeling jealous as I see Blake blocking the air from Stephanie by choking her with both his hands.

t"How much's the contract price? I want us to minimize our expenses as possible. I don't want too much cash outflow. Here are the contract. Do you have anything to change here?" Tanong niya.

         I met someone.... His name Damien, he is very nice but he smokes and is a player, He is one of the hottest boys in school + Bad guy. I really like him but, has a girlfriend named Cassandra she is very pretty and mean.she bully's . Sometimes I think people use me for money, because my dad works for a company. My mom is a singer but I pretend she works with my dad because you know what happens :/. A FEW DAYS LATER .

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