Beyond The Sky - Reviews

MINOR SPOILERS ABOUT POWERS/PLOT!(Didn't hide review due to spoilers, because the spoiler is very minor in my opinion)I cannot claim to be a professional or even above avg. on reviewing books/novels. I consistently try to find good novels that have technology as the super power. What I've typically seen is that the MC seems to skip a lot of crucial steps in progression to what I assume is to just speed up the plot. I've enjoyed reading your characters thought process/actions he takes to build his company so far and thinking further than just making the best tech by starting from the resources themselves and not limiting himself to what we can recycle as of now. The way he uses his abilities, the length of time his training takes to get to an "Intermediate/Advanced" lvl and even him branching out into different fields to take advantage of his mind instead of just relying on his tech makes your MC seem more realistic (If you can call a super powered individual in a fictional universe realistic). Anyway, judging from the upload times and the reminder of this being a new thing for you in the description I know that writing isn't a top priority for you, but I would absolutely love to watch you find a genuine passion/obsession for writing this story and make this at least a decently long (300+ chapters) story.

Newbie author here trying to not be a newbie anymore.Technically this isn't my first story, I have written few short stories as a practice and I am working on another novel other than this one—although that one's put on hold for now 'cause this one's my priority. That being said, it's the first one I'm really serious about.I guess couple of important things to know about this work is that:A) Magic = Tere isn't going to be any sort of system mechanism in this one. Not because I don't like, I do; it's just that I had no idea how to make it unique or intresting. Hence why I went with this route—plain ol' simple urban fantasy. The mechanism of the magic is interesting and diverse (...atleast in my head)B) Plot and world = My plot is going to be slow placed. It won't be going forward at a turtle's speed but still, relatively, it will be on the slower end of the spectrum. The world and all its parts will be explained in the story. That being said, for the first 3 arcs atleast the story will be set ok earth in a fictional town within India (so my MC and few of the casts are indians)3) Characters = This is where the main stuff is. I like to believe that a lot of my focus and plot movement revolves around characters like their interactions, developments, personal arcs. There's a lot of focus on the internal and external struggles of the characters.Other than that, my update schedule is mostly going to be 5 chaps/week, more depending on the scene but definitely not less. And each will be around the range of 1-1.5k words. My plan for now is to have thr first arc to be set free (which definitely going to be around 30 chaps or 40k words) and have it be paywalled later.In the end, all I'll say is that is give my story a try. Read it, think about it and tell me what you feel about it through comments or reviews. Your support would mean a lot and if not the support, your constructive criticism would be a big help too.Thank you for taking the time to read this and hope you like the story ?

This novel is astonishing and in case you like food than it's for you. I am completely not fair composing irregular words to fill out the least character. I did not use a online paraphraser to extend the word

Honestly, I am not into Sci-fi but this book worth my time. I am really glad I came across this. Moreover the story background is greatly described & characters are well explained. Well done!

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The concept is very interesting and the translation is also excellent.However the story itself is a little dubious.... frankly, if I had his power I wouldn't be so worried about finding a job, I will spend my time in casinos and make a fortune! Not study for tests in university...

"Are you sure you're okay?" Cristina wipes her eyes with the back of her hand. "What about your head?"

I haven't shared our conversation with Vinay and Arun.

Happy Valentine's Day!

Esther Violet Jonathan is the main character of this story.

"Is that a Soul Armament?"

author, you need to edit the first line of sentences hive them an Enter so we reader can read it properly and don't be too lazy to give a spacebar on the sentences line (」゜ロ゜)」 Y U NO fix the line Go fix the line ヽ（゜ロ゜；）ノ