Be yours - Reviews

A really interesting story. The grammar could still use a little bit of help here and there but has massively improved compared to chapter 1. I really enjoy this story and hope more people read it because it is honestly deserving of so much more praise. Though the MC is quite OP, at least he has his fair share of struggles :). The fighting scenes have massively improved as well. Keep going author!

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Completed Volume 1: Revelations.What a rollercoaster of a ride. The story was too intriguing, enough to make my poor self save fps to unlock the chapters.Let's come to review. (WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD)Lemon lovers like me are happy cause MC got two waif-us: a bro con and an assassin.Steamy situations arise from time to time, keeping the story fun. I especially like the immersive feeling of reading in the first POV.MC becomes OP slowly. He gets access to his 'golden fingers' that were originally stored in his soul, ig.He even makes some interesting quips when talking to his family members, although internally.***Author-san, make the quips more verbal and give more interaction. I love those.The new arc starts, and the MC+family goes to a new galaxy, Andromeda.Expectations are high, author-san. Please don'tdisappointme.

Author's Note: Gau Duzal means Good Morning

Right.

"you!!" 'Lin Menger' was pissed of.

The Girl was the first one to ask a question and she said

Me:ok stop right there and get out

'I choose Chongchang whatever...'

After finally stabilizing himself, Grant looked down in bewilderment watching this red seed of some sort latch into the center of Grant's spirit body. An overwhelming feeling of warmth, which Grant has never felt in this cold dark place, started to expand in and out, almost like it was breathing. As much as Grant was scared of this little bugger that had invaded him, it actually gave Grant a sense of comfort.

Even when I tried nudging him awake, he wouldn't budge.

"Because of what happened with Wei Qing, I think it won't be very comfortable for you to stay here so I've made arrangements to have. you enrolled in this school. Don't worry, everything you need has already been. taken care of. This school is very good as well, and the chairman is the young master of the famous Yan family." Xu father said.