Argent Chaos

This is a high quality read. The first few chapters are spent setting up the world and the core cast of characters and I must say I was quite immersed and can't wait to read more. The protagonist is a great well-rounded character, facing countless obstacles in her early life, but has a strong personality as is evidenced by the way she defends herself verbally and physically when a gang of bullies target her. Spelling and grammar are top top notch and the prose flows along nicely, making this easy to read and enjoyable. Highly recommended reading!

It's more of a comedy, than anything else. However, it's very enjoyable as one. I'd be happy to read more.The translation isn't perfect, but I'd say the errors are tolerable.

Pre-industrial metallurgy requires mining, coal and blacksmiths. The author who puts the blacksmith without explaining the first two is lazy. Malignant sects may have slaves digging in mines, and cutting forests to make coal, but if all the material comes from slave labor the other sects are conniving and the government supports it. If members of the external court perform this service on a seasonal basis, there are periods of the year that no one obtains these resources. See? In five minutes the author could have a history of conflict between the good and bad sects all involving a blacksmith with a system, the difficult life of an outside sect member and slaves from the evil sect.

Interchanging use of her and his. Good start. Fast pace. Horrible translation. Read up to chapter 34.

There is no hate, only joyFor you are beloved by the goddessHero of the dawn, Healer of worldsDreams of the morrow hath the shattered soulPride is lostWings stripped away, the end is nigh

the translator is destroying the whole novel , inconsistent stats and wording in translation