Another TI Fan Fiction - Reviews

The concept behind this story is intriguing. After reading the first few chapters, I look forward to the rest of it!

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Even discounting the horrible and close to MTL standard writing, this novel is ultimately extremely boring, there are some good, realistic character development moments, but it still has penchants of quite lazy writing that is quite common in rebirth novels (the MC not actually acting his mental age). Though I still would've probably continued reading it if the romance was good. But the moment the Jenny character was introduced I just instantly dropped it. I don't know if she actually is the FL, (if she isn't then I might pick it up again), but I was already extremely bored by that point and that was the just the straw that broke the camel's back.Overall quite boring, which together with the horrendous writing makes it a chore to read through, but it had some potential.

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traps what more to say traps and Loli nice .                         but shota is also good

I came across this novel, gave it a try, ended up getting addicted and binge reading it. Also let me just say, I love the story so much!!! It has a great story plot, sweet and hilarious at the same time and I just can't wait to see how the story will unfold. Especially the part where little Xu realizes who he's been traveling with the whole time???????♥♥♥

I enjoyed the first few chapters that I’ve read. The sounds described add a lot of character and remind me of graphic novels and how they write sound. Its quite interesting and a much different take on a Dungeon game in that it isnt just about killing monsters. I would recommend!

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"Why were you doing that to the monument? Don't you know who the Hokage are?" Iruka asked Naruto as he started to eat the bowl of ramen in front of him.

Bulan, " Dhany..aq tidak mungkin melarang mu melakukan sesuatu yang ingin kau lakukan. Kau yang putuskan sendiri langkah mu, dan kau pahami sendiri konsekuensinya. Aq percaya kmu.

But just what in the world have I done?!

David, Michael, Jonathan and Olivia. Yes shocker a female gamer. George told them about Soul and Blade but they were playing this hot new game called "Tree of Savior" so he downloaded the game and got playing. In a long time again he was happy. And that's where our story begins.