I only ask that you read carefully before posting a review, and please don’t just put a negative review because you personally don’t like a certain type of theme, I won’t bother with it. If I can improve on something, I will try, but I am not going to compromise the plot because someone doesn’t like the MC having a personality which they don’t like.Thanks for reading my novel!
even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story
The general says, "150 bandits were able to survive and disappear without a trace. It seems as if we have to let them go and let the local security find them. Men, we have completed our mission so I think its time to head home."
Now on the boat headed back across to where his uncle and crew are Zuko leaned his back in a dark blue lump as he looked up at the moon thinking about the girl he spent the day with a smile on his face until it disappeared.
