Alpha - Reviews

Plot is gold, although he needs to go through NTR. But we get a much better Issei than the original and warning genderbent Vali.

He's Op but the "Rising while being Op" kind of type

The starting story was a bit off. Mc was a scientist and experience betrayal. And now he reborn with mage family but still its little weird that his father didn't teach some important matters to mc. I understand it if his father didn't like him but reality are they are in good relationship.Also the Mc it takes a long time to become mature. When it comes the power of Mc. The author secretly nerfing the mc. Like he did other things like spell or etc training thingy. So he can't level up fastly even he is talented. So now at the capital arc. He fights a rank 2 guy and we know he can win it but the thing is Mc really struggle when it comes to sword fight then its a rank 2 and he a rank 3. Which is really a illogical nerf of what he practice all those years only to be nearly defeated by sword fight, if he is still a rank 2, I'm sure mc will be defeated.

Ok, for writing quality i give 3 stars because initially the story was a bit rushed and the fact that the main character is able to fight with Rank A beast basically from the start of the story (around 17-30 ch but the story progress slowly so its basically the beginning). Then another fact is that there is a certain battle that lasted more than 10 chapters with the POV of other characters and at a certain point it became just boring, it was too damn long even if i understand what the author tryed to do which was trying to give the POV of the MC which observed the battlefiled from many "angles

Three individuals were exiting the hospital's grounds through the gate. As they passed by, the gatekeeper noticed and greeted them. The mummy guard nodded his head, the witch senior nurse smiled, while the ghost with white eyes enthusiastically greeted as she waved her hand through the white sheet. The gatekeeper made a hearty laugh and wished them well as they leave. As the three walked by the streets, the sound of children laughing could be heard. The girl looked around her, her eyes with excitements and curiosity. The girl saw children in costumes walking towards doorsteps and ringing bells. As the door would open, they would say "Trick or Treat" and would be given candy. The ghost girl wanted to do it as well. But before she knew it, a basket having the shape of a pumpkin was given to her.

She laughs and waves a hand dismissively. "Shut up."

The Romans were confused for a little while. However, after seeing the Greeks reaction, they started to realise it. They bowed their heads in respect as they do not know Annabeth well, except Reyna who was still stunned that Annabeth could die. She was like an invincible person to her and it seemed impossible for her to die. But Reyna knew that she was truly dead. Thalia screamed in rage and sadness because she had the strongest bond to Annabeth as she had saved her when she was young. Thalia went on a rampage in the woods, killing every monster that she came across. She only calmed down after a few hours later. Nico's eyes widened before tearing up a little. He shook his head before shadow travelling to gods know where.

"Rather, why are you so good at it? Didn't you tell me that you're a virgin?" Making a maiden feel good with her first time is something I haven't heard of, to be honest.

"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH"

".... My head hurts "

「As expected, you did notice it.」

Suddenly, arlong then attacked alex. He tried to punch a human kid. Arlong was always hate human, even before joined sun pirates. Jimbe wanted to stop arlong  because he was shocked there was a human that talked politely to a fishman.