Airium - Beta key - Reviews

everything progresses well and even if the middle portion is a little elaborate, the author has done well to explain details to help readers understand better. translation quality is one of the better ones and is satisfactory. although errors in english and grammar take place in the novel, i would consider it to be lesser than most. character design is done well especially for the few main characters though one or two are not as elaborated as i would wish for but this elaboration is enough to be considered satisfactory. author has made it simple to understand/remember the different places and people mentioned in the book so i am extremely satisfied. i hope people who have not read this novel yet do so because i truly think that they would be surprised at how amazing, heroic and heart-wrenching this novel is, just like me. prepare to be shocked, so please get ready to cheer, curse angrily and have some tissues at any time you read! hehe

Beautiful novel put to shame by translator. I remember reading translations of this novel on a site called walkthejianhu (or something similar) and they pulled it off wonderfully, and they weren't even getting paid or taking donations (as far as I can remember), they were purely translating it because they enjoyed the novel and wanted others to read it as well. It's very sad to see such a wonderful novel be translated so badly, please up the quality or get a new translator altogether. Hurry and catch up to previous translations as well please...

I like your writing style but some how the king here was too self absorbed and dint come out worthy of this selfless mate. The way he let his mate physically and emotionally suffer, I felt he needed redemption and not straight forgiveness

Definitely not bad, no annoying system and mc isn't annoying. The world building is pretty lacking though. At first I was reluctant but so far it isn't terrible.

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What is this, copy-past author do not have any new creativity, then don't copy others work,,,,,8iiiikkkkkiikkkjjjhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjnbbbbbbbnb

world background of this Novel is very good. it is recommended for all old and new reader... you guys would love it........................

can be skipped. good premise, but childish attempt. should be more rational yet sounds like stuck with 10 year olds

Slow Slow slow Slow pace, weak mc well not my cup of tea, but anyway still five star cause everything else is ok..  so if you r into mc who is strugling,weak with good potential, snail pace And well written (no grammar mistake) story well here you go you gonna Enjoy this but for me thats it i am out...

The story starts off with his parents dying in a car crash and he’s taken into and orphanage where he spends 12 years. Once he is 18 he and his best friend who he has a crush on leave the orphanage and are about to start their college life but while they are walking down the street she gets kidnapped, raped, and killed. He gets very mad and awakens a system which is a very basic plot and really no time to get attached to the people who died but I could get passed that. What was really got me was the system and world. The world is Earth which is kinda boring. The system is very boring at first it gave him a ton of options about what magiktech to base his system on but when he selected one he wanted it said access denied same happened until he got the A.I one. Why wright all of those systems when he could only  get one from the start. There were so many more interesting options as well like nano tech or if he wanted to build a city Terran magiktech. Overall cool idea but bad execution

Looking like she just remembered it, Irene just shrugged it off and replied.

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