Addedo - Reviews

Extremely amazing, R!!

This is a fun, lightweight story. The protagonist Lu Wu transmigrates into a younger self, but i a very different world and a very different life situation. Of course, many of the familiar memes are still present, but there are some subtle variations. The 440-pound little fat girl from next door, who follows him around like a puppy dog—the fact that both of his parents are screeching neurotics—his extreme reluctance to interact with the original's parents…Yeah, quite a bit of good stuff there. I hope this one gets picked. Surely it is better to have this story than another tired Gamer Fiction piece!

This is my first review so forgive my inexperience. To begin let's talk about the world background. After years of fighting against each other, the four great races (Humans, Orcs, Light Elves, and Dark Elves) decided that instead of destroying the world in their wars, they would create a pact. This pact restricts wars between the four races in the real world, moving their battlefield to the virtual world. They created a game called "Project: Unknown" to host these battles. Our MC has just turned 16, which is the age humans are initiated to play "Project: Unknown". Background reminds me of a book called "Insignia".So far, I haven't really come across any big problems in terms of the story, albeit we are only seven chapters in. The MC hasn't been shown to be a skilled fighter (Hasn't been in any combat yet, though he did spend a little over a month learning to use all beginner weapons against wooden dummies), nor has he been shown to be a great tactician. He has however, been shown to have great patience, he spent a month practicing with the beginner weapons, and then worked in a mine for a little over two-weeks. (1.5 - 2 months of play and he's still at level 1)The only problem I would say I have with this novel would be the grammar. To me the grammar isn't too big a problem since you can still get the intended meaning from the lines, sometimes you might even get a good laugh out of the mistakes. I feel like this novel can be a good read so I'm going to stick with it for now and see where it goes.

can't say anything. im stunned:) too stunned and also jelous"( hehe, good work author! U hve great potential for this~•^• start becoming ur book fan hehe??

This episode was, of course, a key turning point in the narrative of the Crusader Dad canon. While up until this point the series had been mainly a slice-of-life drama involving the father struggling to turn his son to a righteous path of study, combat training, and the true faith, here we see the very real consequences of the conflict that has always been stewing in the background. The conflict the father was always preparing his son for - the day the weebs take the holy land. We finally learn that the father is not disgusted by his son's tendencies toward anime due to simple personal preference, but because affiliation with Japanese animation is a key characteristic of his mortal enemy. Knowing this, his extreme acts of aggression to discourage these tendencies can almost be understood.However, the Father himself seems to recognize the fact that his repression of his son's tendencies may have done more harm than good. Notice at 0:12 how the son's initial hesitation about taking up his father's sword are not for the seemingly obvious reasons: that his combat skills are considerably worse than his father's, or even that he agrees with the weebs due to his own love of anime and "related media". No - his stated reason is "I'm a heretic

Gr8 story

I like your story title it is marvellous, I love your writing style. your plot is super strong. I hope you must complete your novel, I'm waiting for the next.

Ling Xiaolong's journey had been extremely wonderful.  The ending was a masterpiece because he became a truly god.  The beginning of this novel is also wonderful and I am confident that it will be a first-class novel. I wish this novel to become very successful and is due to you andrrichde writer and your books well worth fame

"Hohoho Adam can fight a pokemon directly, knock a rock type out with a single punch, you can jump super high, run super fast.........just what are you?" I suddenly hear lusamine speaking from behind a tree

Once again curiosity gave me courage enough to advance another step, and I raised my hands intending to make me look bigger, I had seen my father do the same when he herded this creature and its mother into the enclosure, a mother who by the didn't seem to care about anything but the lush grass beneath her.

A faint purple glow covered his body for a brief moment, freeing him from the embrace of gravity. He propelled himself on his prey without giving it time to gauge the effects of his spell. Surprised, the Shadow didn't have the time to get away. It finally chose to face its opponent in a hand-to-hand combat despite the danger of the white light that his weapon emitted. The creature lowered its body to let the offensive pass above it, while raising one of its arms towards the back of Harel. Its foggy hand's size increased drastically, exceeding that of a normal human, before closing on the hunter's body. Unable to evade the attack from this angle, he lifted the shield of blackish bones attached to his left forearm with the hope of not being crushed.

''Certo senhor, mas primeiro nos siga para a sala de recapitulação.