A True Love Story Part One - Reviews

hello guys... I'll shamelessly give myself a 5 star... i just wanted to say that i use first person perspective here in this story for it to be immersive. however, i think that i will switch to third person perspective soon, i don't know but i will try it, it may be better, i think..... and i will try to lengthen each chapter because i fell that it is too lacking and feels rushed... so, yeah that's all.. ohh i still want to add that this is my first work and i am not that good in English. so please bear with it. thank you... don't forget to like??

i hope you going to update soon because how the story goes in harem  and overpowerd mc is and having children in this chapter cant wait for the andventure to continue

Sorry for the spoiler but. The mc becomes an alchemist master. Ssshhhhhhhh. He plotted against. He dies. He reincarnates. He silkpant. He slaps face. He ruthless. He strong. He medicine man. Then he medicine god.

how did something like that, without creativity, ended up in the top 5??... it's full of slaps in the face, in addition to being a poorly made copy of some novels out there literally the same (same plot, same beginning, proclaiming china best of all making copies kkk.) I've literally read more than 20 stories with the same content (mc reincarnates, he can't even be average, and when he does it's because of a friend who always has to be a rich chubby or the heartthrob who 'protects he of bullies') and on the concept of evolution, I've seen two done entirely the same way. protagonist needs to hide some strength and says he wants to be discreet but leaves slapping in the face and "saving damsels in distress". congratulations for the author's creativity (ps: for those of you who don't know, I'm being ironic)

Mc is imbecile. Story development  is sucks., .................................................................................................................................................................

I've read till Chapter- 3.7 and I have enjoyed so far. Will continue reading. I have given you 4.8 stars just because of the updating stability. I know you are keeping busy but try to update at least 2 chapters in a week. That would be easier for readers to remember what happened in the last chapter and we don't have to read it again and again. Overall it's a really good novel. Adding it to the library right away.

this is a great novel, with a very interesting concept, and a lot of potential.i am looking foward to see how things will happen and how the characters will develop.

The book has really made me feel like I’m diving into a new world and I’m excited to see what is next! The writing is clear and to the point and the story pulls you in!

This story is unique, though... I would like to see what the princess see in her kingdom when she said it was beautiful. Great first chapter! It made me urge to read more what happen after their encounter... We love a strong female character!Keep up the good work, I love to see this world more.

Giving myself a solid 5 because You know a good book when You see it. -A gOod read should be unpredictable, keeping you glued and turning in tour sit as you try to understanD the mysteries of rhe characters before hou. Endtime Apocalypse System has that distinct touch that would keep you anticIpating. The slow rising action, The fast paced battles, the heart wrenching discoveries will keep you coming back.

Overall a very good book to read. Very different from the other books that I have read. The developpment of the story is great its not too slow but not too quick making the story all the more enjoyable.

The synopsis of the story caught my attention because of what it described and the plot that the story of the novel has is very interesting. I recommend this story if you like science fiction stories. Keep it up, Author