80s: The Real Daughter Turned Evil Tore Up the Green Tea and Kicked the Scumbag Husband - Reviews

Disappointing read for this novel. It appears to be based loosely around another novel that I recall, something about 7 sisters or the like, no matter. Overall from the 15 free chapters (creators note in chapter 1 said 40 odd free) I found this dull, uninspiring and so typically cliche for this genre. Usual start is a struggling MC, down and out, needing cash fast to save ill relative, is miraculously saved by a female lead who reveals his family as their benefactor years ago. Discovers there are 3 other sisters who he now gets to live with and is to marry one by orders of their mother. From this point it is just a failing travesty. The MC is ineffective and quite righteous, but fails hard to be engaging, I could find nothing to remotely connect with to feel any particular emotion. The sisters are, fro what I have seen, rather manipulative, each not wanting to become a bride and don’t hesitate to throw other girls under the bus to gain his interest.Again, i cannot recommend this as nothing more than a sad attempt to gather readers giving nothing engaging back. Another criticism I have is the lack of reader tags to help identify various elements to enable readers to make a informed choice AND the premature chapter locks in place. Locking anything, before say 40 chapters, does not allow enough story to be assimilated and given a fair chance to decide whether it is suitable. 16 chapters is barely a footnote in a novel.

This is not the type of book I would generally be reading. Nonetheless, this started out really well, and the current amount of chapters is not sufficient to leave a proper review. The grammar requires correction at parts. Good luck!

Who else just remembered it was called Gaia

I didn't talk after that. I could tell Carter was obviously feeling stressed with Carla being immobile and I didn't want to break his chain by wording something wrong.

"Stripper!"

We get out, dress ourselves in formal attire for work.

Upon hearing this, Ryu could only feel more anxious despite Chie's attempts to cheer him up.

"This is where we part! Good luck, Nazariy!"

Udin : (Geleng-geleng kepala).

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

"Didn't I already mention it earlier? Yes! Creating! We will create someone who is strong in the human world.

Hello, author here!Here to explain and answer any questions about the book. Feel free to ask, remember there are no stupid questions!-"Who is the main character?": There's actually one "main" guy which is Saahad, but there are other characters that the novel will be in the pov of for world-building and to move the plot forward.-"Will he be overpowered?": Well he'll be pretty damn strong even from the beginning, but he can still be beaten and there are other things that are stronger than him. So, not...really overpowered.-"Whats your update schedule": I actually began writing most of the chapters for this novel since June, but I was on vacation and could not upload them. I'll stick to one chapter a day to give me time to proofread and change up some plot points as I go along, since I have an idea of how the story will progress.-"Whats your inspiration": Heavy, I mean HEAVY Warhammer 40k influence for the world-building, of course its not going to be a complete copy and there definitely will be more differences than similarities. There's also a sprinkle of starcraft and Lord of Mysteries.Please review the novel-the good, the bad, and the ugly- if you have the time, they do help me as a writer. With that I hope you enjoy the novel. I know I did!