6-Minute Surrender [esports] - Reviews

It is getting really complicated and good

Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? ? love it ?

well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world.0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.

SUGGESTION: READ THE REVIEWS BEFORE READING THE STORY SO AS NOT TO SPREAD TOO MUCH HATE AND INSULTS ON THE BOOK AND MC LATER( LIKE I DID).those are the comments i wrote hope they ll make u understand a bit about the mc mentality:"...aizz i just need to know if he ll change his stupid belief or find a compromise because as he is now he s just AN idiot.not saying he should go around killing women but to not even touch them while brutally handling men(like literally almost causes two men to force each other)...that s ridicoulous and make him much more of a shut in edgelord that takes women as something sacred(mega simp) than he would have been behaving normally""...i ve seen ur review nowmoral compass is absolutely flawed as his thought process is not normal as u commented.for the typos and ecc u barely notice them as i focus more on the story than the grammar itself .still while it presents an interesting(?) new  approach to some, for many others the story just gets  impossible to immerse in  as i said before his thought process is not something many can immerse in unless u a shut in, that idolizes women with anime girl pillows and figurines." if u still want to read it? good for u. if not? glad i saved some of ur time.

Awesome story so far man. Pls continue. Can't stop thinking about how it will end.                                                            

"They sure are busy, even they could not clean their place"

She told him "I refuse to be like you".

If a bullet were to be fired at Lin Xu, the wind would become so strong that the bullet changes direction, if Lin Xu is trapped in a fire, Weather Report will deprive the air of oxygen and thereby kill the fire immediately. Its primary goal is to keep the user alive—even if the user wants to commit suicide! If Lin Xu tries to jump off a cliff, the clouds will form out of nowhere to cushion his fall, if he decides to drown himself the water will instantly evaporate, and if he tries to stab himself-- the blade will rust!

"In the kitchen hun"

"Oh...then were you planning on letting me meet your parents sometime soon if this didn't happen?" She asked despite knowing that Maverick was too honest at times it hurts her...well, you know what they say...truth hurts.

"Darkness Descends, the first update."

"What makes you say that lass?".