[Ori-GEN] - Reviews

Boring . Mc too boring.fk useless mc.only read if you want to waste time.MC can't think for himself. Way to emotional. Author try to justify his every decision.

Obligatory self-review from the author! Giving myself such a low number, just to make the rest of the score seem more realistic :D Will change that once genuine reviews will start appearing here.For the story:If you are naive kid, then you shouldn't read books involving ***** themes like smut, gore or psychological warfare. As such, begone. I already turned too many people on the bad path with my other novels. Warnings:There will be smut in this novel. Not just mindless **** that you can google and get with sound and video attached, but a smut that will be caused by the story and that will serve the story.At times, there are time-jumps between chapters. Unless the story is directly continued as if there was no chapter-split at all, then suddenly a random part of the story appearing is the result of the time-skip.This novel is the absolute pinaccle of what I can write right now. While the chapters in general will be mostly lighthearted, the same cannot be said about the true plot of the story.Thanks for supporting me and I hope you will like this novel at least as much as I love to write it!(For curious, yeah. This is an indirect continuation of the other "While others cultivate,..." of mine)

another brain dead mc. I only read the free chapters but I bet when all those big shots show up and they all probably call him senior and this idiot mc still won't figure it out.

Story is good and is sent up to really develop in the future, however I’m 35 chaps in and the mc isn’t using his reincarnated advantages. Like I get that he’s 5 yr old but he should be trying to do more. ie read, sign contracts, etc

very good........................   ......

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"It's alright, he has been caught so you guys don't have to worry," the nurse pipped in. Hearing that the enemy had a gun, Chanming's face became so pale that ghosts were quaking. "I just don't think this is going to end so easily..." Ai Yu mumbled to herself, her fingers fidgeting between her knees. "What did you say?" Chanming asked. "It's nothing, I'll discuss it with the policemen later on," she replied, a reassuring smile appearing on her face.

S.V

Everything was unchanged, only the letters and the written on the parchment scattered across the counter that Eirwyn didn't understand before had become clear and comprehensible English.

「...hi, uu...」

Than that man stands up and walked toward Priya, his eyes was having that devil look in them, as he was moving nearer, Priya was moving away from him and after few steps she found no way coz there was a wall, out of afraid she closed her eyes. she could feel that man's hand reaching her but even after several seconds no one touched her . so she opened her eyes.

Ghost smiled again "correct"