seems interesting I'll read when there are more chapters
This one's a very well writed story. If you like easygoing kingdom building, that's for you........................................................................................................................................................................
Bro at least put some +18 or adult or something and who can u write a 13 years old doing that ruined the story on chapter 6
A nice story with good development up until now
I’m currently at chapter 199. I started reading mainly because it was labeled as a romance novel and didn’t have a Harem tag in the description. The first five chapters were hard to get through, giving the impression of a shallow story filled with ecchi, but the next 25 chapters surprised me. I was excited to see the development of the MC’s relationship with Liana because she was written with incredible depth. The MC, on the other hand, was an annoying and exhausting brat, but I kept reading for Liana.So, I thought I could just enjoy the MC’s growth and watch the romance unfold, right? Wrong. The story became tedious after chapter 29. Javier’s daily life was repetitive and boring, and it only started getting interesting again around chapter 80, when the MC’s family development began. However, things started getting weird with the introduction of a possible harem. I kept going because, after chapter 23, I really wanted to see how the relationship would develop once the MC reached adulthood, but in the end, I was disappointed.I checked the comments and found the author’s confirmation that this is, indeed, a Harem novel.I appreciate the author for their work. I was just disappointed with the direction the story is taking regarding Liana, but I plan to return once the novel is further along to check out the MC's adult life. Thank you, and congratulations on your work!
Nice Novel I'm looking forward for future chapters
While it may be a bit early to review this book at the moment, based on the story so far and this author’s other books, I can guarantee that this is going to be absolutely amazing. Though from the looks of it, this book in particular will likely be quite dark, so if you don’t like violence I would probably suggest finding a different book. But then again, the story has barely started at this point, so most everything is still up in the air. I guess my conclusion is that, if you don’t mind a bit of violence and you like well written stories, this book is probably for you!
Waiting for more update po excited na ako sa premium chapters congrats po more stories from u kasi dami ko po natututunan sa vocabs from u will write stories too nakaka inspire
The story was initially interesting, but it literally goes in a circle for at least 10-15 chapters with no real development. Then it skips weeks to months ahead with no background. There is no crucial plot just a story that continues to circle around and around. I wasted coins on this story.
The story is interesting. Keep up the good work.
I like how you mixed rebirth genre with a story for teenagers. Story seems easy and fun to read love it! I think this story will be a great comedy because I can't imagine a demon being a teenage student and to help other people to ? Cover is preety nice tho!
Good story . steady progress and good cheats.