I jave already read many chapters. Now I give a review. It has good potential to be great, and famous. Nice writing. Luck to be a great author
This novel in mtl is called god of life, and it is just about earning money and spending it. While courting chicks along the way. It gets pretty boring at the middle.
Firstly, I liked to say that I am a TBATE fan, and when I first saw this, like many other tbate fans, it had me a bit off guard. I've knew for a long time that some other fans like to write fan-fics, or other "novels" that's heavily similar to or even the same as TBATE. I first debated if I should read this since I thought that the story would just be similar and all that stuff, but thankfully, I gave it a chance.Now I like to move onto the ratings:Writing Quality- I really love the writing quality of this novel, like some other review, grammar has nothing on Kenkan. The writing is a part of why I love this novel so much now, things are being explained very well in his writing.Stability of Updates- Kenkan updates at least once everyday, and if he doesn't he will update us readers/audience of why he couldn't update as much. I really encourage the readers to read his author notes because it gives us a lot of important info. This section of my rating is another part of how I am sticking to this novel so far.Story Development- The story development if very good IMO. The pace is going pretty well, but sometimes it can get a bit faster then normal and I think thats okay. Like I said in my "Stability of Updates" section, Ken does asks questions on how we want the story to be paced and how it is going to go. He is very considerate on our comments and puts our thoughts into whats going to happen in the next chap. Character Design- This connects quite a lot to my "Writing Quality" section, his writing makes emotions flow out of the characters, sadness, happiness, regret, sorrow, excitement, e.t.c. I don't have much to say in this section but I'm satisfied on how the characters are so far.World Background- Kenkan explains the world background pretty well, in some chapters he will explain things about the world and its system while in others, he just fixes his time onto the plot. IMO, he doesn't rush in detailing the world in the story, Ken doesn't put too little or too much information in his paragraphs. Overall, I give this book a 5/5, for my taste I really do love (addicted) this novelSo, please for new readers (mostly for readers who also read TBATE) to give this book a chance even if the cover and title looks similar because the author did explain in one of his chapters that he will be changing some things about this book soon (including the cover and title), also check the paragraph comments since he also does answer reader questions in there.
At first the main character acts stupid and reckless as if he can take on the world but he does end up learning respect and learns to not just self destruct his own body every freakin time he fights. Overall it is a pretty good story. Minimal grammar issues and good plot
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Nice storyline, doesn't get powers without learning but does get help learning from the best. Plot line is going well. Characters are well made. Overall good story.
its the third story you try to steal and put on this site stop and find something else to dothe story and already translated on another site it is very advanced do not read this unauthorized copy
One of the most enjoyable dungeon novels I have read and I am hoping this story will go for a long time. Dungeon and class breakdowns have really been entertaining and make sense. Even the thought process of how mc gets to her chosen dungeon weapon was cool.For now, some of the side characters could use a little more character development but that is a small nitpick on my end. Really like how most of side characters and even party members have goals. The party members are not just blindly following the mc like loyal dogs like most novels. Some of them even have obligations that force them to step away from party. It makes the world seem more fleshed out and makes me feel main character is going through many people to get to her own goals. Which I really like.The beginning is a little slow and I was kinda put off by the low-esteem mc and her family interactions. Felt like I had to push through it. After all, I'm not going into dungeon novels to learn about domestic issues involving self-esteem.However, once the story moves towards the training & dungeon life (which is the majority of this novel so far), it is really good.
This review had already been done before but I comment: My Marvel Academia is a fan story created by DuckLordEthan in Devianart, but this story recreates that world completely through the bases of My Hero Academia, however it will not follow the MHA chronology because It is not a copied and pasted story, the story will be completely new and unique as if it were another Marvel universe. I hope you enjoy it and thank you.
This is a nice book and judging from the way it unfolded, we will have a lot of stories to enjoy for the next several days. This is a different take on murder and I hope to see the sci-fi part as well. Great so far.
i am not really sure about teh stability of updates, and i really don't care when the story is this good just make sure the you don't drop it it is great... you can go on hitas and pick it up later but just don't drop it k