just another kind of story where idiot mc got it's cheat... maybe for some people reading the idiot mc is funny but just not for my plate. the idea of the story is great but author love to be the smartest one so he make the mc become the idiot one. #shunshin#
Good story .Very detailed .I have never read a NPC story ,but I liked it .This story has good potential .Keep it up author .We need more updates !!
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I love this story, fun, interesting, logical, and so much more. Totally recommend reading this. Keep up the good work bro. By the way, you should make a Discord, or Patreon.
The first chapter was enough to hook me. The plotline, writing style, and characterization were great. I like the voice that the characters emit. I think it could be better if some paragraphs were to be divided since it was too long and the main idea was different from the other part. That was just my concern, but overall it was a really great story.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The storyline is very interesting and I sure I'm going to fall in love with the book once I start reading it.I am definitely adding it to my library
Knee jerk review as of chapter 10. I'm all about the beginning few chapters of being high importance as that's what makes me keep reading. So spoilers are here but only up to chap 10.It's so far The Rising of the Shield Hero but edgier. Generic MC and backstory, the classic bullied by everyone, he's useless, powerless, etc, then gets crazy powers, and a system to boot. The writing can be repetitive and at times is so choppy it becomes tedious to read. World building is glossed over more or less as he "studied in the library" and knows most everything of importance. Level scaling, explanation of magic, just a general sense of what is "strong" to be able to compare to isn't their either in my opinion. He also levels up insanely quickly as it seems killing single wolves while he's way above their level still garners him a fair amount of exp. Which is also never mentioned or shown, he just levels up instead. So the sense of progression isn't there and it begs the question why not just cheese it and power level off of weak beings. Why even need a slave? He says he needs a meat Shield but he seems to be doing fine on his own. Even going out gaining like 3 levels with ease just after he gets the slave and this is while it's recovering. Overall it's pretty middle of the road, not really doing anything new or interesting. I may pick it up time to time to see if it gets better or maybe skip a few chapters ahead and deal with the lost information. Like I said the beginning is the most important to me as it sets all my expectations for the whole book and right now I'm just kinda "eh" ?u200d♂️ Also I have no idea about updating stability, so freebie 5 stars lol.
First taboo: no matter how beautifully written, don't let description bring your narrative to a halt. The author of a novel must keep this in mind: don't over-describe anything, whether it's the Tetons, the sunset, or the zebras on Waikiki Beach. Otherwise, the strength of your narrative is going to suffer.
Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears.Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements.Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them.Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males.Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.
a good novel.easily one of the best in this trial period (for me).no system. a likeable mc (for me tho).few cliche.####################