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Okay I'm gonna go ahead and say it, this book is insane (insanely good ?) the setting, characters and the plot everything is just so amazing, this is officially my favorite. i love ?? it.
It's not amazing; it has its flaws but also potential. I like the theme of vampires and supernatural creatures, although there aren't many stories in this theme that I enjoy. I'll give it a chance, even though the writing is a bit weak. I hope the updates are at least regular. The point-of-view issue bothers me a little, but I don't think it's a big problem.
This novel is so refreshing. Please update more, author ???
Well, it involves the seven sins. This is quite a big story theme. I hope for the author to pull it through. Great job so far with the characters. ???
Really loving the story so far. Adding to my library???
Hi guys, so this is my first time trying a historical romance in a Victorian era language and I am open to corrections. Not a native English speaker so I try my best, lol.?Anyway, I hope you enjoy reading my novel, Gracias.?
Shameless author here ?Writing a review for my own book is always a bit awkward, but hey, I’ll give it a shot. And if you have any questions about the novel or anything else, feel free to leave them in the comments!"So, what's this book about?"It’s about a guy named Lucard—also known as the Crimson King—who’s betrayed by his trusted disciple and the vampire council. After his brutal death, he’s reincarnated into the body of Draven Veyron, a powerless servant in a small vampire clan. Now, with his memories intact, Draven sets out on a path of vengeance, power, and… well, maybe a little redemption. If he survives the chaos, of course."What type of guy is Draven?"He’s a complex character—once a king, now a servant, and definitely not your typical hero. He’s got a chip on his shoulder (understandably), and while he’s consumed by revenge, there’s a deeper part of him questioning whether he’s doing the right thing. Oh, and he’s got a wicked sense of humor, too, in case you’re wondering."Will Draven be overpowered?"Draven’s definitely got some crazy powers, but he won’t be steamrolling through every battle. He’s strategic and cunning and often has to rely on his brains just as much as his brawn. It’s more of a slow burn—he gets stronger, but not without consequences and having to fight for every inch of power. Think of it like a high-stakes chess game with lots of dark magic."Is there romance?"There is, but it’s not the typical romance you might be expecting. It’s slow, complicated, and woven into Draven’s journey of self-discovery. You’ll see sparks, but don’t expect a fairy-tale love story. It’s more about betrayal, lost connections, and whether anyone can truly trust Draven in the long run."Will there be a harem?"Haha, no. There are definitely other characters, some of whom Draven might have complicated relationships with, but no harem. Draven focuses more on reclaiming his power and getting revenge than finding a bunch of romantic partners. But… we’ll see how things unfold ?"How often do you update?"Currently, I aim for about a 7 chapters a week, but I’m trying to stay ahead of schedule. So, if everything goes well, you can expect more frequent updates!"Aren’t you a little full of yourself? You rated your book five stars?"Hey, what can I say? It’s a pretty amazing book! At least, I think so ? It’s one of my favorites, and honestly, writing this has been a wild ride. There’s always room for improvement, but I’m proud of it. Go ahead, check it out for yourself, and see if you agree! ?
Is this harem or no harem?? Hope it's single FL
The Author and Co-author (same person) are here. This is my second time writing something, i hope my improvement could be noticed. Yes i shamelessly rate it 5 stars because duhh it's my work heh.
A delectable coconut, that should be praised to the high heavens.
Hello, readers!Welcome to my new novel, and here is my base review of it.Once again, I will try my best to cast aside my Writer Bias and give you an objective rundown on what to expect from this story.First things out of the way... this is a story about someone reincarnating into a novel where he is in the body of a character (An Extra), and must navigate his new life in this new world in order to reach his objective (Which is the novel's perfect ending).As you would expect from a story like this, there will be a lot of popular and cliche tropes used, especially since it takes place in an Academy, but I will do my best to subvert your expectations.The MC is not a villain nor a hero, but somewhere in-between, who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. He can be manipulative, cunning, and incredibly sly in his actions... since he is an Extra and would rather not act in a direct way.However, when in certain scenarios where a direct approach is necessary, the MC rises to the occassion.Secondly, the MC's identity and his relationship with the Novel he gets transported to (As well as a majority of his past) will be kept as a mystery for the readers, and it will play a key role in the coming chapters. This is important because many readers might be influenced by preconcieved notions about the character, and I just want you all to judge the book and its characters by their own merits.Thirdly, regarding the worldbuilding and pacing... please note that this is an Academy story, so most events will take place here (at least for the earlier chapters), so do be patient and enjoy the narrative for what it is. The pacing is fine as well, since the story starts off in the meat of things and doesn't slow down for a while.Still, I believe you need to read a few chapters (5-10) before deciding whether or not it is worth your time or not. It will be preferable for you to read a lot more (maybe Arc 1) to be able to fully grasp the story's essence and its direction, but... some readers might not want to dedicate that much time to this novel.And that's fine.I could tell you more and more about the many good things about this novel, but that would be overstepping my bounds, since you're supposed to read this with a fresh perspective and, hopefully, enjoy what you read.I won't raise or reduce your expectations for the story, but it's just as good... if not better... than my most popular works.Finally, this book (as is any work of fiction) is not for everyone.Some will enjoy it and some won't... which is absolutely fine. If you do not like what you read, it doesn't mean the story is objectively bad. It just might not be the one for you. Please make sure to only criticize the story if it is of objective relevance to the story and not some arbitrary claim that only applies to you. Stuff like "I didn't like the characters, so this story is bad" or "The MC doesn't act in the way that I want, so he is dumb" are bad ways to review a novel, so please make sure to bring concrete reviews (both positive and negative) if you make a review. I appreciate constructive criticisms, and I also really appreciate support and any feedback you have as readers.This novel, as are my other projects, is a work of passion and I have no intention of dropping it.If you like what you read and want to support me, please do so.Thank you... and Cheers!
