Okay, Here's a review, so far I have read three chapters and this is what I think, the writing quality is A bit mid, but I like the little world you create in my head, I like the way you started it when he was young telling a story to his daughter. Good. But so far, I haven't heard of any world changing threat yet. Maybe I'll see later on, but it should come early.
This is a really good story. I love it. I can’t wait for more chapters to be released. Anxiously waiting.
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This novel is not my type anymore I don't like it, I can see where this novel goes a demonic hero who helps innocent girls and the author continually repeats how irene is an immeasurable beauty that can even seduce the sky
Lena... She knows how to make a book that truly exceeds expectations. Although I am only a few chapters in, I can already tell that this book is going to be gold, and I am not saying this because she's a friend. I genuinely believe this book has something weaved within its pages that could change the FL industry into something more than just a sm*t or romance book. All I'm saying is that you should give it a try; be prepared to be quickly amazed, though, because I was. Good job, Lena, and I do mean that. 11/10 so far. Might be the first Webnovel I actually read for real on this app.
Inquiring:If this is as good as people make it out to be how come there so few reviews and views to it. Nope someone can give me some insight. :)
Great book and nice concept especially with the transformation jutsu and the updates are also steady. nice work author
I loved TGV(the author's previous work).Sure, many took it as NTR coz they had 0 braincells fueling their brain, many had problems with other parts of the story, but to me, the story itself was a masterpiece.What brought TGV down was the instable update rate, and the subpar writing quality.So yeah, I openly blame the author for ruining my experience with TGV.I was apprehensive to start this, worrying it would just be a repeat of TGV. Well, partly, no.The updates are stable(tho it doesn't say much since there are only 15 chapters out rn), and the writing has improved.What is a problem however, is the POV. The novel is written in 3rd person POV, since a majority of WN seems to dislike 1st person POV for some incomprehensible reason, this works in the favor of readers.However, the author decides to use first person pronouns like 'my' more often than not while narrating. It may seem like a minor issue, but while reading, a sudden disparage in the POV like this can be extremely immersion breaking.That aside, the story itself, along with the characters is very good. There isn't much to say seeing as how there aren't much chapters out yet, all I have to say is that give this story at least 7 chapters before you decide whether to continue or drop. The intro is done by that part, and you will get an idea of what to expect going forward.Since this novel managed to pick my interest, I will be looking forward to reading more of it while hoping the author doesn't mess up again. And hey, imo, the story is worth the chances.
Review at chapter:247I have to say it’s a pretty nice story. We have a smart competent mc, who got a goal forced on to him by a Godly entity. The story has a decent power progression and there is always a showcase of power by stronger entities to keep the mc in his place. There are also a difficult condition the mc is placed on where he has to trust tge Godly entity to obtain his true powers but this goes completely against the mocks personality, which in turns adds a bit of intrigue of weather mc will slip and trust someone only to be schacled by his decision. So yeah the Godly entity is kinda tricking him(fuck her btw).The story also is quiet dynamic where you actually get to see life of a mercenary to a life of a narcotic seller. Thr mc has a neutral personality he is willing to kill but not actively seeking it. And a wiered attachment to hover bike.I would say this book has good potential and by the previous works of the author it seems he is visited with his upload schedule and story developement. Just saying whenever I read the book I have a sense of curiosity cause the book dosent run on the normal cliche story points. One day mc is building his cabal and 3 months later is is participating in invasion of a different planet as cannon fodder.
I’ve got to say, this is a really well-crafted novel. The author definitely has a knack for storytelling—it shows in how well the characters are developed and how smoothly the story flows. It’s easy to follow, but it still keeps you hooked. I’m excited for what’s coming next and pretty sure it’s going to keep me entertained all the way through!
This is a great story wish it was already done being written I want to read more and more of it keeps getting better I love misha's character can't wait for more
A good story with good pacing, there's always a daily update, and the author informed us if he can't update or something comes up, not ghosting us like some who do thatkeep up the good work author!