it's a good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
Good writing style, and interesting story. But maybe you can more elaborate Carmila's revenge in prologue/chapter 1. In addition, don't forget a hook so the readers will be curious about the next chapter.
I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?
It is a really good novelI just hope to read the chapters as soon as possibleSo please update them as soon as possibleAnd i just hope that the keep coming out on a daily basis
Where is the next Chapter? I‘m eagerly waiting for it ????
I love the story of this novel. Especially I also like Yuri's story. The character development is well made. Also, the MCs don't have a naive side that makes me love this novel. And for the building of his empire, I hope it is not too hasty. I hope his world background is expanded even further.
I am reading this novel from 2 days and I have finished all the chapter of this novel and also your own another novel is which daughter and devil son but you take a lot of time for new chapter so I am disappointing in you please write more chapter quickly???
Honestly I don't know how to describe this feeling that I am getting while reading this book but If I have to put my finger on it then it would be UNCOMFORTABLE I mean a lot uncomfortable ? At first it was progressing well and nice when there was only one MC but then came our OG and that's where I started feeling weird, How MC teaches OG to make his own harem and how he even helps him. And then when Ayumi (a sub heroine) came in the picture and that's where my patience wore thin. I mean just look at how our MC (he himself) helped her (sub heroine) realise her fetish (being cuck queen) with OG. In my opinion it would have been best ( at least better than now) if you have let OG's story progress WITHOUT MC interference at all if you really were trying to create two MC's kinda story tho it would have been perfect if there was only one MC.There are a lot other things I would like to say but I will stop here as it will discourage other readersTo Author: A question for you, suppose you were a READER of this story (not Author), how do you think you would feel when you liked our MC (story wise) and Ayumi (literally) both, and suddenly there is a third person (OG) who f*** Ayumi huh?....I don't think it would be anything less for what I am feeling currently i.e., only if you don't have any weird fetish LOLSorry But I don't think I can stay in this journey with you any longer tho keep up the good work.
"Oh, Doc."
"Oh really."
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I was feeling like...the world is about to get destroyed.