FaithlessnesslJY
Vol 7 Ch 30-40 he seals the deal with Lucia and they cook the rice after his assassination.
Not a story I would read. I feel nothing for the character.
i am here for the fast pass. but don't judge the book without reading it
It feels empty. It feels like the protagonist is maintaining a facade, as opposed to acting naturally. I also can't help but question the practicality of certain events. Posing as a khilman, a supposed battle hardened maniac, that... decided to randomly investigate the appearance of beasts? If the idea was to avoid suspicion why even think to bring up the issue at all, especially when the protagonist insists on using the area as a hunting ground? The actions are completely contradictory, then you have him perform acts of great foresight, as though he planned such intricacies. I don't want an idiotic protagonist, but making him senselessly intelligent will only question the validity of all his actions. Why doesn't he simply have a change of clothes? Why doesn't he enter and leave the town at more reasonable hours to avoid attention? Why doesn't he utilise his makeup kit to take on an appearance or conjure a back story that perhaps gives credence to his late night shenanigans. I'm sure there will be some rationale later on that will somehow justify these actions, but I can't really understand how he can appear so shortsighted.
What can I even say? This story was a guilty pleasure for sure. You know it's bad but keep reading anyway. I'm saddened the ending was so rushed too but I hope it gets a sequel somewhere down the line. So many plot points were just abandoned that I just want to cry for caring in the first place. The archangel quest where he needed to kill undead or something. The ash blade. The black dragon sword never got to tier 6. There were supposed to be like 2 other people on the same level as the scholar. A new adventurer team was teased but never properly introduced. Just a lot of things never get resolved. I don't think he even technically finished the quest to gather the 7 treasures or whatever, at least he didn't finish the original purpose of the quest. you can just tell the author got tired of the story and wanted to move on. after that year-long break he had, the story picked up in pace tremendously like he was just trying to get it over with. sad but understandable.
muy buen historia es muy estimulante el desarrollo que lleva el personaje des su transmigratorio como se desenvuelve en el entrono de los años 1500 se adapta el papel y desarrolla su ciudad para su propio beneficio y de su pueblo
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trialread webnovel novels nowadays are of poor quality, it's either it's poorly translated or the plot is not consistent and is confusing, repeated chapters etc ????????u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️
I really hate it when people are judgmental of a story within the chapter comments of a story, so I am really glad to see that the people commenting seem to be casual internet trolls rather than self-employed pro-USA water army members. Webnovels are for enjoying, not for people to yell at each other over cultural differences.
A very interesting and high quality book. Well written, very enjoyable to read. More or less unique story. Great job! Personally, I really liked it.
THIS BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD BUT EHAT MAKES THIS BOOK GARBAGE IS THE ATTITUDE OF THE MCS BEAST!! HE LETS HIS BEAST DO WHATEVER THEY WANT AND THEY ALWAYS POUT WHEN THEY DONT GET THERE WAY AND HES LETTING ONE OF HIS BEAST BE A BULLY TO OTHER BEAST IN THE SECRET REALM!! THIS BOOK WAS DOING OK BUT AFTER THE LAST LIKE 5-10 CHAPTERS IT BECAME GARBAGE!! I HOPE PEOPLE DONT READ IT AND I HOPE IT GETS TAKEN DOWN!!! UNLESS THE ATTITUDE AND THE BEASTS CHANGE THEN ITS NOT WORTH READING AND ITS BASICALLY SAYING ITS OK TO BULLY THE WEAK AND ALL THAT AND THROUGH TEMPER TANTRUMS WHEN THEY DONT GET WHAT THEY WANT!!!
