I’m starting to really enjoy this keep it up, it gives a different feel to the other stories even though it seem a bit cliche I’m ready for how you approach this story.
I liked a lot this story. There are very few novels with fairies and even fewer where they are perv fairies... i like that mc interacts with others and his fairies. It also shown that while he has not realized his phisical body affected his mind making him mlre childish in some aspects... cannot wait what kinky se* stuff he does qith the fsiries and his 2 familiars... the rab it and frustrated darl elf can wait xd
Five stars because I would shamelessly glaze my own work as the author.—WHAT TO EXPECT/REMEMBER—[1] SEMI-SLOWBURN:If what you want is an action-packed story like there's a fight scene every three to four chapters, then let me inform you—this story probably isn't your cup of tea, so instead of throwing a tantrum why "There's barely any fight in this sht!
The start starts good but at the middle the author just starts copying entire paragraphs or describing the same scene in a single chapter multiple times.
I like the world building and I love the theme. First chapter instantly got me hooked. Keep up the good work!Also, there are parts in the first chapter that are unreadable. Maybe it's because of my settings as I am in dark mode, but you should use just one color.
Fantastic novel and a great read. You will love it.
Overall good start with great potential some dialogues feel cliche though but its pretty interesting and unique, lets see where it goes in future.
ntr lets goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
This is your story so, knowing you im goona love it welcome back btw!!
great book ??...... nice humor .........
This book is amazing Big missy here is touched and it hasn't even started I
novel has a lot of potential,grammar is good, and has a good basis for later, but so far I've been very frustrated as the novel gives me a lot of detail I rather find unnecessary, with multiple pov switches sometimes a chapter. I also am really not a fan of exploring the plot with a child mc for to long with which the novel so far has set us up for. The mc himself has a lot of room for growth which is good but as stated it seems like we'll be in his childhood years for awhile which really is gonna hamper that. Overall this novel is a novel that is gonna grow into itself but for me personally is gonna be one left to develop before I invest more of my free time into it.