Wow, the synopsis was captivating and the story even more exciting. Would love to read more
You've something going here to be honest. Just a little feedback on your writing style, call me old school, but try to avoid writing in short forms and numbers. Spell out your words and numbers like, instead of 'U', write 'you'. Instead of 15, spell it out fifteen. Otherwise, it's a good start. Will read more.
I really like this web novel! I hope it gets updated often!
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Best Dark Fantasy ever. Keep up the work my brother
Hey guys author here,I don't have much experience in writing so if you have any suggestions or questions please let me know.Thanks for reading.
Jester clicked his finger and suddenly all the equipment and ingredients appeared in front of him.
"What are you all laughing for?! It's not like I can hold myself"
UP NEXT SEQUEL:
"Ready for the interview?" He asks.
Would love it if this were to get a update
Hokage: *Sigh* "I can feel this matter will give me another pile of documents to sign"