Looks like this has a better translation than the other reviews indicate. Not sure if something changed since they left their reviews or what. Overall, it seems like a pretty good story. I find the MC to be really entertaining. Yes, there is a system, but I think the MC's personality so far at least makes it interesting. Same with many of the other characters especially the sect leader.
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This is the author with a shameless 5 star review (I don't think there is any author who wouldn't give his story 5 stars) so I'll review it in steps. MAIN CHARACTER-The protagonist Rey is a genius with an idiotic behaviour and is quite annoying. I also get annoyed by him. But there is a backstory which I hope to explore and there is a reason for his actions, so if you could bear with him. It is not weak to strong because the mc is already strong but there will be change in his attitude and behaviour which will help him become a better version of himself. The MC will not be completely op for now, might change depending on what I feel and what you guys say.PLOT-The plot, to understand easily will be like a vrmmorpg but in a real world without any tower or dungeons (if that makes it easier). There are many novels in which there is a system that can talk but I wanted to create a system which is very much human and isn't defined by the system rules, so the plot for me is pretty interesting. WRITING-Now this is tricky. I won't say I am good or what I have written is good because I still don't think what I have written is good enough. So that is something you guys will have to read and decide. But I do know that 50 chapters later the writing won't be the same cause I will try to improve on it. PACING-I honestly don't know whether I am going slow or fast because I try to be as descriptive as possible so that you as readers can imagine what I am thinking and that might make it slow paced. I am fairly new, so sometimes it might be fast or sometimes slow. ROMANCE-There won't be a harem and romance will not be coming anytime soon. Though there is and the first to guess, I'll add your character in the story.
This book is pure gold. Two Teachers, two students, and two systems. Author you are a amazing writer. Keep it up. I wish you good luck my friend.
The story is good and fresh. Much better than other apocalypse or system novels. The only small issues I have are: Every character is shown as aloof, cold, emotionless. Such themes are repeated too many times in the story. Also, mc shouldn't have gone in the raid on vampire proginator, which is going on currently from ch 160+. He should have leveled up more. But it's a small issue.
it is a very very good novel.But I have flashbacks about "My Great Demon System".....both has their sides that is for sure. Brutallity is the "My Great demon System" and demon like. the oposite this novel!!!
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I have to say this character a super childish that it comes off annoying and some of the sentences in this novel makes no sense like there's one line in chapter 8 I remember it was bright falling down or bright comes falling that didn't make sense, could have just said it's getting dark. besides that it's a lovely story it just the character give me a headache it makes me annoyed
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I can't believe that there is a hard sci-fi novel in Webnovel! The world building is just amazing. It's been awhile since I got invested in things like starships or weapon types one can usually see in worlds like Halo or Star Wars. You can actually learn a thing or two from the author which includes topics like military terminologies, formations, pyshics, and even lessons on diplomacy. The characters, especially both the MC and FMC, are just endearing to me. Both of them needs and help each other to accomplish their goals, unlike the usual harem junk or comedy relief "female leads" we see on webnovel.I definitely recommend this novel to the sci-fi lovers out there!
currently at ch 34. below average story. The author tries to portray mc as a thinker and intelligent person, but he is stupid. showing off way too much, instead of remaining low key
This novel came up as recommendation.I was wondering if I should read it. The plot was different so I thought I’ll give it go. I have to say that I am glad I did. Its very interesting and different. And I enjoyed reading so far. Read 10 chapters. Can’t Wait for more ??????