Lenaleia
hi dear readers, i am Arthur trams, i used to have a novel published in this app/sight. but mid way i had my due to an accident, i deleted my novel and i am reposting it now, i will post every chapter daily and it might take some time to complete some chapters -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------thank you, your dear authoranyways, i made some changes and they look as good as the old one
Erotic and enthralling, a true page turner.this book is a poignant exploration of love and lust, it's filled with engaging characters and a compelling storyline. A must-read for fans of sensual fiction.
Shameless author alert! I'll be shameless enough to rate my book a solid five stars, because, well...I wrote it and it holds a special place in my heart ^_^!This is my second literary baby and the best I've written so far. Chester, has been rattling in my head for ages and I'm thrilled to finally set him free. He is a feisty lad but I promise you'll love him!So, hit me with your thoughts, comments and constructive criticism - just keep them coming!Although life isn't a genie that grants wishes - my only wish is for you to support this book and join Chester on his journey.
I rate my book a solid five stars and I'll tell you why. Don't worry, I actually do have an objective reason why.I wrote this book because I was tired of reading urban fantasy wealth building books with no substance and wanted to write one that won't be so painful to read.Most of those books suffer from what I like to call the “deliberate stupidity syndrome” whereby the MC could've gotten a hundred billion dollars by chapter 30 and shown everybody how great he is but the author keeps him dumb just so the story can continue.Any reasonably smart person would have exploited those systems and become billionaires by day 2 or one week at most.I didn't want something like that, so I created a system with a natural limit. Nico (my MC) can't just print money out of nowhere. He has to actually plan and work for it. With no infinite money glitch, we get to see his hard work and cheer for him on the way. The second thing I wanted to curb was “face slapping.” If the wealth building book doesn't have a dumb MC with the deliberate stupidity syndrome, the book will be rife with useless face slapping.These books have no actual plot and use face slapping to pad the stories. I wanted to write an urban wealth building book where the story has an actual plot and goal and doesn't need to rely on face slapping to be good.I hope these points convince you to read my book. I will appreciate it if you read all the free chapters before deciding to drop.Thank you in advance.If you have any questions, you can ask here.
Started out not really liking FL. But the story progress and she developed for the better. Can't wait for the revenge part.
I dont know if i every reviewed this before. but i have been here since u re-released chapter 40 in other book. I can say for sure its a great fanfic about an mc with mixed blood from senju and uchiha and best part is they used kotoatsumi on hiruzen then killed danzo. loved the focus on medical jutsu and fuinjutsu. give it a try.
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In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)
Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout each read and the picture created is undeniably beautiful with great use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole.
Excellent work ✅✅✅This is one of the best works i have seen this year.The book is already better than most books I've read considering the fact that it has only 3 or 4 chapters and it's this interesting already.And it has such a catchy title?Bravo ?? Please ensure that you complete the book, don't drop it halfway like those other writersContinue the good work.
This book's concept is so new. I love it. It is a refreshing book. I can't wait for the plot to unfold. Excited for future updates
I like the concept for the story. It is a great read and if you enjoy fantasy books this will be a story that you would want to read. Great character and plot development.
