Your story is amazing. Keep it up, honestly. it is progressing at a perfect pace. Curious to see how the world shapes and how you expand on it. My only criticism would be more characters per chapter I want to reeeadddd moreeeeee.♡ Keep it up
It’s good overall, the background, the world building and the relationships, I Am waiting for more chapters, then I’ll make a seconf review on the story
from the synopsis/description, i already interested, it's kinda fresh story plotline to me
Keep up the good work author and be positive always
The release schedule is slow but the story itself has potential. It is mostly about modern families and the relationships between those in them. Seeds of romance in the story has also been planted in the early chapters and I think there will be a great dynamic between the two MCs if they end up together.
This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
Great book very good writing loving it so far slow pace on chapters but I ain’t complaining
Hindi ko talaga alam na nagsusulat ka rin ng serious novels ahaha akala ko puro kagaguhan lang
It's actually kind of my first time reading from a male perspective. It was very fascinating. I actually re-checked the genre of this novel and it was contemporary romance. The author has my respect for doing male-centered romance novel—those are very rare here. Author-sama has a very intriguing way to structure the sentences and paragraphs—which I loved the freshness of it.Note: I was so happy reading until I noticed I do not have coins.. T_TOverall, beautifully done!!!
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Neha sat in anger
She didn't know what skills he was implementing at her nether regions, but she could feel her tender clitoris being pinched and massaged by his fingers. Within just 15 minutes, she had once again fallen into the crazy vortex of lust. Her legs had opened up in the M shape while her hands began to massage her breasts.