to be honest, you wrote this book well. but is it possible to make the Mc the one not being ntr'd.
damn this is hella goodddd, can't wait for more chaptersssss
So, a new worry was presented to Shi Du. Her son was truly healthy, thank goodness, but he seemed to have a bottomless appetite. When he was given the chance to drink first, he drank everything dry, leaving nothing for his poor sister. At first, she thought that it was only due to the fact he hadn't eaten in a few days. That, once he was satisfied, he'd slow down. Her hope was in vain. She felt so guilty when her little Li'er would whimper in hunger but she had nothing to give. She even had to bring in a wet nurse for fear that her baby girl would starve.
Blacky no longer can hold off his hunger as he sprinted through the village to find a prey.
(Swoosh) Then he got sweep by the crow upward flying in the sky.
Many of his opponents want to bring him down by using a beauty trap. But sadly they always failed.
As it had and always shall the moon witnessed the life of the girl. It saw the care she showed when taking care of her brother, the sadness she kept within at the thought of her parents and the love she felt towards the only person she associated with. Though the moon did not want to admit it, it felt pity towards the girl. Maybe it was the fact that the girl only found solace while talking to the boy or maybe it was the sadness that the girl held, but the moon hoped that unlike what it had see happen so often in the past, the girl would end up happy.
"Oh it's you..." she said angrily
When the child was finally born, his mother's tenuous sanity rendered her quite incapable of caring properly for him. That is not to say she did not attempt the deed, she had to try. Her neighbors simply did not want to deal with her or the child. So it wasn't until something unusual occurred that the village took charge of the child.
"..."
The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
So much to do, so much to see