It is an okay novel with a bad writing quality in the beginning, but it did get better later on. The story is quite around the place, however, still understandable and could use a few more words with each chapter. Character designs can be great to okay, so far this novel is not too bad and not too good. It is the author's second webnovel and has potential to be better.
Great novel, and has a nice story so far. There was no difficulty in understanding, and overall, I think that the book has great potential.good work.
Good JobI Like itStory and Characters
gave a shot. MC is scum, the story is standard "earth people are better" dogshit. Like, I can't be bothered to read a wish fulfillment circlejerk.
Who the hell drove in to spoil their fun moment?love the ? moments. Want more of it???????????????????????.Fast-forward to the night, will anything sexy happen?
It's a good concept from what I've read so far. However it needs deeper world building and character design with more detailed arcs. Some fights were barely a paragraph long and most chapters ended in the same way.
I can't stop thinking about your book, to the point where it's keeping me hooked all day and night, and i am so excited on what will happen next??I wish i could write like you!?
the book is good no doubt but trust me anytime you read about Anon smiling liken it to this one or probably joker's
"Ok sucker, bye." I quickly flay to school.
"No, Fritz, I already asked my friend, he said he were not done yet too , it is too difficult he said desu."
Not that the wormies would let them come so near my stem body.
after wearing nice clothes Sora image changed greatly, from a poor boy to a rich and handsome,Looking at the handsome boy in the mirror, Sora was very satisfied, and then left while the beautiful boss still looks his back