Shit wifey pregnant too
This is so stupid his father get injured and needs surgery whynot use her fram spring water to heal his father where is ne fmc brain. When she got injured in the frist chapters her spring water healed her
is there such stupid thing.? not reading anymore
OH MY MAMA, I'M JUST IN LIKE WHAT, CHAPTER 64 AND I'M ALREADY SQUEALING!!!! AAAAAA BOTH OF THEM ARE WAY TOO SWEET
I am at chapter 1 but it is so amezing need to read more though but I alr like it from here!
let's stow this away for now, until it got to 100 or so chapters, that way you wouldn't suddenly ran out of chapters whilst craving for more. anyone with me?
This story was catching and has that pulling effect. The piloting chapters were detailed properly, plot setting was in sequence and easy to read. The creator did an excellent job making this story. I do recommend this, a must read.
Sigh... Let me do it since no one gave the proper review yet –1. Mc is a transmigrated one and always thinks or should I say plan properly before acting.2. Story is a harem one, alright? I love harem... (No beta here). 3. Guy has a system that rewards him with points after he berates or beats the protagonist in any way. Points can be used in the shop. 4. Let's say the world-building is average but it's manageable. 5. You have to imagine all the character's features by yourself since it's a Chinese one. 6. So? Mc r*p*s protagonists until they are not protected by the world's will and then killed them. You got what I mean? 7. Mc gets overpowered after he defeats the first prot.8. Mc is a scheming one and you may find it boring simply because everything goes according to his plan so... Yeah f..* me.9. Chapters are free so read them as quickly as possible since it's free? Yeah the free thing is always good for me, lolFor AUTHOR,Author bro, thank you for such a Novel
The way the words are weaved to form the narrative is one of master weaver. The authors expertise in breathing life into words is one that can be learnt from by most authors including myself.
Writing quality is just
Stolen from author without permission. Go read it on Scribblehub
A bit clunky but good but please dont include harem in tjis or it will become just cpmon trash after you mess up. Please keep it without harem
In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)