ch 254 hehe momo taking initiatives now eh
The hell with the ending
Solo Leveling is the bad copy of this novel
"It's not terrible; I do enjoy the action sequence and the backdrop. However, there's a point where the author gratuitously inserts illogical misunderstandings. The protagonist then chooses not to clarify them, seemingly out of a desire not to appear defensive."
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his story is nice. We have a lot of good elements, like a nice system, a good combat scene, nice loot. This is a good crafting story.
But we have also a few problems. The MC is alone. We don't really have other characters except for the MC. (talking about adventuree not girls he is sleeping)
Usually on RR when the MC has no friends he is a badass op personality traveling in the wild. But this is not the case in this story. The MC stays in his city and craft. This makes the story tension very low. Author should focus on MC traveling and more world biulding rather than foolish love and his foolish decision.
I highly recommend the author to invest in other characters. This will make the MC personality grow and add complexity to your world.
ahh this is best
Haha, what I said is two completely unrelated things. But I guess I was in the wrong for that terrible word placement.
It was meant to exaggerate the repetitiveness of stereotypical novels, I have nothing against harems if it is done correctly.
I edited the original message since it seems to invoke a unprecedented response.
Not trying to invoke a flame war since I still have novels to read lol
Keep it up author ??Aja! Fighting! ?
Nice. Another story that only have 0 chapter.
He is actually h*tl*r