This is the best kingdom building genre story I have read on this platform, so far.Now, star review:writing quality- Unlike most stories consisting kingdom building and mmorpg genres, it doesn't have any name inconsistencies, and the grammar is good. Although, there is need for some editing, as a every other sentence, especially in later chapters, have jumbled up words. I know that it sounds contradictory to the 4- star that I have placed, but the point is that this simple mistake still doesn't take away from the story and its depth.story development- I have read till the latest chapter, binge read. I am so glad that the comment I made in the first or second chapter in regard with the sects and hidden families, hasn't proven to be true. I am also very happy that there is no annoying and unnecessary young master or mistress character yet. There is no dumb unnecessary face slapping trope yet. The characters are nicely fleshed out, and yet shrouded in some mystery. The MC is not out right dumb or edgy and evil af, he has his own ideals and got some good advisors to help him. Most importantly, there is no xia country forced into it, although there are many characters taken from chinese background, at least they are genuinely helpful and not like everything that has happened on this earth, is or was done by se chinese dude, I also like the inclusion of different cultures and there famous characters. Character design- Same as above.Updating stability- As I have written- I have binge read this book, hence, I am not sure about this. Though it shows 2chs per week.World background- This is like fresh breath of air, well not entirely, but still. Instead eastern empire and xia country, it has many factions and mc and his parents are from western front, at least according to knowledge provided till the latest chapter. There are still a lot of mysteries to be solved regarding the world background and it is enthralling.Finally I hope that this story don't get dropped or go on hiatus, and the quality be maintained pr improved.
have not read the book but the other books the athur has made are great so...5 stars.I recommend reading monkey King before this so this book gets more chapters and you don't have to feel like you want to die waiting for chapters.also first
Just why, dis story was jit’s Complerely ruined ntrEd more times than one can count but you the make the Mac Stay with the girl……what only of it wasn’t Like dis I would have kept reading
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Xxxxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx s xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx5
One of the best originals on this site, it's a literal hidden gem ?. The character development is just awesome as personally I care for overpowered protagonists with a good head on their shoulders, and I also loved the subtle romance with YANDERE on both male and female leads. Overall a good read if you're looking for high quality novel with an op protagonist that doesn't kill your brain cells.
I love how the MC thought he was alone, only to be bombarded with a snap back to reality pretty much. I really like how stories like that turn out with that premise and I know I'll enjoy this too with the more I read. The grammar needs some work, but I'm not gonna hold you too much to that.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Pro'sYou can see the writing quality improving as the story continuesMC can cultivate outside of the systemCon's I noticed many inconsistencies in the story The story is in desperate need of more world developmentThe system is an almost a non-existent part of the storyCertain story points that are added for plot are illogicalQing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master-The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.
I really liked the story and even the relationship between the two of them are healthy! The system helps the MC a lot but the MC also genuinely cares about the FL and tries his best to make her happy! It warms my heart!!!! So much fluff and even the interaction between friends and family is hilarious "Single dogs~" lol haha! They have good communication, no dumb misunderstandings, no dragging out even we don't have random face slapping and everyone is so cooperative! Truly it is a rare breed! If you are sick and tired of the dumb misunderstanding and haughty characters with -90 IQ I recommend reading it! Its a breath of fresh air! So rare to see healthy relationships in Chinese novels! So yeah And author-san please update! I need to see what happens!!!!! My precious characters! I can't wait!
You GUYS ARE MY SAVIOURS❤❤❤....the quLity of the translation is just SUPERB it doesnt make me wanna throw my phone out the window and call it a day, and bc i cant buy the novel yet i had to endure the ink burned translations for a long time. But am soooooo happy now that i found this. Thank you so much for taking up this project. I really hope you have the best of luck and just have a great life like you made mine.❤❤❤❤❤❤
If you don’t like ntr then just leave and don’t say anything but is you do then this is top tier although there is no consistency in updates