reading for trial read, not expecting anything but found myself a good story. it's a system alright but the way the system works was different then other story so far and that's making this story unique. then I realized I have read and also liked another story from the author.
Oh dear author pls more. I give this novel five rated stars because this novel has made it up to the top 5 novels i love no top 3 novels i love. I wish for u author to have great success with this novel u have all my love and vote but pls post more ❤❤❤❤❤??❤❤
Hi reader's please give a feedback about my story it is to you is it's a negative feedback that's ok for me, and if it is positive feedback I very apreciated that. I realy need yout feedbacks. That's all and thank youシ︎❤︎
Interesting ……………. !
Below is concept art of Emma the fox girl that first appeared in CHAPTER 003. Before writing, I have always liked to draw. Thus, will try to add more arts in the future.
terrible novel honestly
I usually don't write reviews for novels, but the reviews in this novel honestly baffles me... disclaimer though, i'm a free reader so I only read the free chapters plus some more using those free chapters tickets. alright, the good stuff:1. the MC is actually smart, for most of it anyway. the MC(and to a certain extent the author) understands that in order to keep power in the "modern" era, you have to give some of them away. history clearly points that an arrogant/out of touch monarch will just trigger a french revolution-like event, so those reviewers that said "the mc isn't arrogant enough" or "mc loves democracy" shouldnt be a leader in any type of organisation at all. author, i'd say you post this novel in the wrong website. 2. MC is actually not too into democracy that much. he understands thst autocracy/absolute monarchy won't be accepted anymore, because most superpowers already changed their monarchy type. now, the MC is ambitious, so rep democracy or republic will hinder him, but he understand that democraxy also has its ups and downs, so instead, he chose the constituional monarchy, so even though the emperor isn't really above the law anymore, he still holds most of the power. 3. Grammar is okay, alongwith the formatting. The bad:1. the author sometimes made mc do weird things for the sake of the plot. like when he stayed waving to the people because "they never see him
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no me gusta escribir reseñas por que no se escribir en ingles y para que quede raro prefiero poner todo en español pero en verdad me gusta leer la historia
in cultivation type novel ..there is a difference in immortal cultivator and mortals..not only in strength..but also intelligences and thinking.a young cultivator thinking and intelligence exceed ordinary mortal of same age .this logic is missing in this novel.characters behave too childish mc portrayed as too dumb ..like he can not speak up is mind only complain in his head.he does not like attention.but in some scene he thinks why no body is looking at me?.. MC can comprehend every thing and any thing but first he need to compared how to talk is mind out. and a bit of intelligenceFL character is too irritating ,brainless,very lustfully, its OK to portrait her as loli but there is limit to it.author need to be mature.story can be great if author can take care of certain thing while portraying the behavior of the characters. otherwise reader will lose interest .what is use if plot is powerful but character behave silly
Amazing book loved it fun to read great character design and development great world building fun and easy to enjoy and lose yourself in. The characters feel alive and love/hate the villain mc
Curious to see where the mc goes from here...will happily wait for new chapters, just hope to see even more uses of his system for devious reasons