it is a book with potential. I love it though and it release a kind if loveable tension. Great job author.
I've been looking for your book after the other one and finally found it. It would be great if you have a discord so we can have an update in case something happens to your novel again.
This is really good ngl, the backgrounds good, the story I like the concept of saving fiction, I love the characters in the cover page e.t.c
I'm rating this book a five, call me shameless as an author who rates her book, but I'm telling you this book is worth it?❤️
This book is cool I love it. I can't wait for more chapter updates. ?????????????????????????????
Honestly, there are many stories with the MC as a professor who exudes a powerful aura with a stern, disciplined, and unapproachable demeanor. When I read this novel, I realize the protagonist in this story, almost similar to 'A Villain's Will to Survive,' as both are about a third-rate villain known for his elegance, arrogance, and perfectionism, masking many secrets. The MC in this novel is obsessed with his past missing/dead sister, whom he replaces with his current sister after transmigration. In contrast, the MC in 'A Villain's Will to Survive' is obsessed with his ex-girlfriend, whom he replaces with his fiancée after transmigration. I just hope that the author doesn't end this novel as disappointingly as 'A Villain's Will to Survive.' So here we have a brocon MC. What I want to see from this novel is perhaps for Charlotte, his current sister, to become more siscon and more possessive. This novel has good inc*st material if the author wants to go in that direction lol, though anti-inc*st readers will hate it. The good part of this story is how the author handles and connects each arc. When the author introduced Arwen as a background character, I was surprised at how it brought many red threads in this story. It introduce many new arch that have connection with Arwen. For critics, with MC behavior, I don't consider MC is a suitable romantic lead, especially in harem genre. That's why I'm not particularly fond of how the author introduces numerous heroines to fall in love with the MC. It's better pair Astrid with Ezra, original protagonis, rather than making Astrid develop a crush on the MC. I think, in the original timeline, Astrid had a closer relationship with Ezra as a rival and tsundere heroine. Again, my critics, Ezra's character is too similar with Sylvia's from 'A Villain's Will to Survive,'. Both are perfectionist and even have similar in their stalking behaviors. More over both have their mothers' deaths attributed to the MC. Oh, dear author, you can't make an outright copy of that one, too. Additionally, Margaret is similar to Julie from 'A Villain's Will to Survive'—both are knights with a strong sense of justice but are betrayed by their comrades. Many readers of 'A Villain's Will to Survive' were disappointed because, in the end, after much teasing, the MC did not end up with Julie. Will you do the same, author? Just pair MC with his sister?
one of the best revenge books I've read, can't wait for the adventures ahead.?
Keep spirit Loffa. You've got a great number of viewers accumulation every single day. Good job
An interesting story only problem is the gender pronouns mistake over and over again. The error is all over the place, yet I am still interested in the story.
Call me shameless, but I rate this novel 5 stars!! Of course, because it's my work.??? It’s still a WIP novel, but I’ll do my best to improve the novel as it’s my first time writing one! Thank you for your time, and please join me on this journey! ❤️❤️??
Author being shamless with a self-review: tickFor any readers this is my first novel so please forgive sporadic uploading whilst I fine tune everything and do my best to make this is fun as possible! Along those lines, tips and suggestions are so welcome to me, be honest, I can take it.On a final note, I added a comment at the end of Ch 1. for this but I'm going to randomly include the odd song recommendation here and there, so if you like, keep an eye on that and then try to go back and read the chapter with the song playing. Let me know what you think of that as it's something I'd like to test for a larger project.Happy reading all!
This is a book you won't want to miss reading. Aside entertainment, it teaches you to be strong and to rise above all odds.