Such an intriguing start, can't wait for more of this
First Review!!!!it's a great read, Author should publish more chapter so as to understand where Hazel was, and also her power.
I read until the free chapters.I enjoy it at start because mc kind of smart even though there's no world introduction where things just keep popping up all a sudden superpower,magic, cultivation, system and rift etc. It lacks world building but still entertaining until the flaw start showing up when he awakened where too much ranting/monolugue happen.MC biggest trait as smart all of a sudden turning to idiot where all his secret and explaining how it works one by one to his best friend even considering telling the system and his cheat until he understand it how much of a idiot he is? For the all people he should understand how to be cautios because how people treat him even betrayed by his childhood friend. This destroy the novel to me. author changing his Character from smart to idiot for a plot there is no stability. I mean he can make a mistake but not like this this is idiocy to the higher level.Then. Even villain want to kill mc because color of hair. LOLI can only rraise it 3.5/5.0
review for event. I like the interactions between the characters and look forward to finding out more about their power system. Some of the sentences are clunky or think the wrong word was used but still very easily readable. MC zombie queen -> Eva is adorable and life is worth living if you have fluff and food! I wonder with being able to experience living again if she will remain a bookworm? Early chapters have set up the world well and clearly shown the relationships of the main characters. Very glad to have tried this story and am eager to read more ?
Good work author . Don't let negative reviews get over your head . I tried writing a story once and failed miserably . Those people who talk bad don't know how hard it is . Keep up the good work buddy , adversity always gives opportunity for introspection .
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I had the chance to read the first couple of chapter for free and it was enjoyable
This is a really promising book. I like how it wasn't just the Demon Lord who realized that he had been reincarnated, which isn't usually the case in this genre. I can already sense the chaos he will cause in his current world - in school at that - through the Help Club. The dialogue and punch lines are on point. Hilarious? Keep writing!
A lovely plot and an intriguing storyline. Always been a fan of paranormal romances and this is a good one. FL and Ml have been through a lot yet the story is just starting. Can't wait for more
Huge amounts of info drops at the start and the writing quality could be better but overall a decent read.But i would prefer the mc to be less submissive to his sister.
I only laugh madly in my mind.
The Monster kicked the door and the door opened. "Carl! Come here now!"