this is a good novel so far yhe only problem is the start it needs to be either re-writen or edited because spelling and whatnot is not done well until a few chapters in when spelling mistakes disappear for the most part
Awful novel ...Logic is thrown out the window like MC bought close combat weapons even tho he only uses a sword ...Bomb suit apparently cheap and even tho bomb suits are heavy weight suits he can move without any difficulty ?Ight im out of here MDAAV is so much better
That was a cliff hanger . author, you owe me another volume . it was good and refreshing for a change. i enjoyed it. will recommend for others too. the only question is what will happen to ethan. and may god bless moon goddess . lmao. my best wishes .
Very good pleas keep writing.
Over all the story is amazing. The author could definitely improve on world development, but the story line and character development is on point. A great book so would definitely recommend.
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The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story.I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters.As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent.I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library.All the best,Author!
Good story flow although a couple of parts in the beginning seemed a little forced. Still the author continued to improve throughout and even corrected the forced section through plot in latter chapters