I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level
This is basically a continuation of the translation from where the last translator left off. Please don't expect regular uploads as I will do so when I have the time and mood to do so.
All I have to say about this story, the book captivates with its rich character development and intriguing themes of fate and choice. The interplay between Eli and Smith creates emotional depth, well that my thoughts on it. Keep writing.
This novel is worth reading don't let's it pass you
wouldn't the plagiarism ???? this novel was written and published and taught in schools for decades.
I'll give it a five star before I start the real review.So, first of all, too few chapters to truly judge the book, but I'll tell you guys my view.Let's start with the plot: -Unlike the novels out there that just have the plots bent by the author's will, here it seems realistic.Characters: -Just like the plot, the character have reactions like a normal human would. So, this part is a check as well.World building: - Can't say anything about it right now since not much of the world had been disclosed.Now to the main thing - Grammar: -To be honest, it's not that good.It breaks the flow, and the words are in a mess.So, I will say, it's bad.Overall: -If the grammar was better, then the story would've been more engaging, but that doesn't mean that it is not like that right now.It is good.The grammar part is a let down, but the other points make up for it.In conclusion - You should try reading it once.
I'm now hooked and waiting for more updates.
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Good story, well written good style, characters well thought out, everything is good, great novel??????
It's going good for now. I am liking it for now.
just reviewing the book for extra fp, don't take my review seirously
Unfortunately, I am asked to download the application to complete the reading, but the application does not have my native language, so I read through Google Translate on the browser.?