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The reincarnation is really different from others..., the character is really different,,,, Perfect choice,, overpowers, this novel is becoming perfect day by day...
I want to like this story, but MC is so dumb, and as of chapter 51, I feel like everyone aside from MC's family is evil. All character I 1st thought was their friend turned out to be evil/betrayal/rapist. I have grown to like some characters only to know they were actually bad and a fate worse than death await them. MC is also very stupid and acts antagonistically to everyone annoying him. There's nothing to gain from acting as such aside from creating unnecessary enemies. The fact that he kills someone but feels nothing is also minus to me. But that's just me. No insult intended to the author.
Can already tell this is garbage just by the title. Not sure what kind of delusions you had to think that any normal person would enjoy a novel where the main characters fantasy is to have a harem. A harem is completely fine, but when his main aspiration is to have a harem, he’s just become a perverted loser who—in reality—would never receive a woman’s touch.
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I just Finish reading the whole novel nad it was ok. The reason being the ending still left a lot of things hanging. but granted the author did say in his fair well message that it was his way to end it completely while they could. Since it seem like author has health problem. So i really can't be to mad with the ending they did what they could do with the time a strength they have.So the only thing i see wrong other then that the ending could have been better, is that the mc is to patriotic and belittles everyone else but then again it seems that this is a problem with Chinese novels they always seem to leave you hanging with the ending and have china as the best and Japan and the USA as the bad guys our as extremely petty. Oh well you get use to it after reading several novels and learn to expect this narratives. So all in all a standard novel only the world background can be considered good.
Great story! I like how well the characters develop and grow slowly but steadily. The slow unveiling of the story's world and history that leads up to the current plotline is well written and keeps you coming back to learn more.
If these books are chosen which im pretty sure there were higher rated ones they should not be in the tria read. In case you dont know this was in one of those vote for a book to be translated things. Definitely higher voted on books tha this. Also I guess it was picked so the cotes dont Matter and the competition does not matter
You really have a wide spectrum of imagination. To make up different scenarios of differing settings is truly a creative feat. It is amusing that the POV is like the narration of the readers, letting us be more intimate with the story. As always, grammatical errors are something that we have to take into account when writing. They can be easily corrected and will able you to have a better progression in your passages. Each scenarios can be a story on their own, that is provided. However, I do feel, as opposed to the other review, that the pacing is quite hurried? I don't really know how to word it, but yes, it feels like that. Also, in between dialogues, please put in a little bit of transition, so it wouldn't be as lengthy as it is now. Let the information flow out through the whole chapter instead of clumping them in one paragraph.All in all, this is a great test for imaginative people. It is exciting to read different worlds in each chapter! You are a great writer, so please continue writing! I'm gonna be cheering you on!
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