Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
MC is an idiot, doesn't question why people will pay a ton of money to him just for him to play a VR game despite him wanting to hide his brain AI. Just giving away his secrets for free. Dropped at chapter 124 (right after this majorly stupid move).
Out of order chapters. Ripped straight from another site.
Hello, Author of Project Overworld here!Just to let you all know that this story is currently indefinitely paused (I got myself a job and I'm only doing some writing in my free time now).I haven't brought myself to set the state of this story into "Completed" yet since I feel like the ending is a bit rushed and there are some ideas worth investigating for a potential sequel.In any case, I had a wonderful time writing and releasing this novel on this website, so much so that writing became one of my favorite hobbies out there.I hope you all will enjoy reading Project Overworld if you are new to it, or other wonderful stories if you've already reached the ending point of my novel!
I thought this novel was going to be a dump with cliches and nonsense, but I found myself loving the story and its originalness, especially for such an overpopulated genre. The only downside is that the chapters are too short, and the story seems slower.
It seems a to be a nice story, with a good world and interessting characters. The backstory of the concubine is tragic and the reborn version is instantly likeable. But that the backstory is partially unknown gives the story tension, that is needed.The characters around him are also likeable, hopefully we see them develope. The adding of new characters is a bit fast, but it is okay, if it didn't continue with the pace it is going. It would be to many characters to keep track of.The englisch is sometimes a bit iffy, but it is mostly tolerable.
Praying to the author, thank you for this novel you have written for your devoted readers. We will read with all our might, promote with all our might, and help you raise through the rankings. Brothers and sisters, let us band together against gods, devils, dragons, hell, and heaven to land at No. 1. Let this pray end. Amen.
So far this book has been so enticing with the writing style and how descriptive the scenes have been, it truly paints a picture in my mind of how things are truly happening. The characters are very likeable and this story has so much to offer! I can't wait for more!
The best thing I find here is the writing quality since it is so easy to understand and detailed. The details are hard to understand in some books but here that's not the case.I see a chapter every day so the updates look stable.The story looks well thought and the characters look fine too... (Just read the synopsis guys, if this isn't a unique plot, what is?)The world background, the time intervals between the events everything is also written well.Overall, I really think it's a good story with a unique plot and good writing. Keep up the good work :)
Mc story is absolutely illogic, he is just a fool. Author trying to make some faceslap but its absoluty not mastered. the 2 points come from translation quality and story updating (that’s also useless)
So far everything is going pretty well, both sides (Nero, aka. Naoko and the King/other heroes) has been giving enough detail on whats happening. Writing Quality- Although somethings get kinda repetitive, the quality is still pretty good, up to my standards, its alright. Stability of Updates- The author updates this story quite often, I feel satisfied for this part so far.Story Development- This story is more fast paced and if you don't like fast paced then I don't think you should read it; but for me I like it, fast paced stories are my thing.Character Design- The author doesn't fail for designing his characters. So far, every time we have a new character arrive the author explains them in detail, doe sometimes I feel like he does get a bit lazy but I also get lazy in my writing so I really have no complains in this section.World Background- Although the author focuses more on the character development and story/plot, the world background are explained little by little. It is not like some novels where they explain the whole world in one chapter. The author gives us details about the world in some chaps and not other while making things clear and understanding.Overall, for my preferences, I give this novel 5/5 so far. I'm really liking how things are going so far. Every thing is going smoothly for me so far, I hope to see more great things in the future.
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