The book is great with regards to the world's backstory and the ongoing character development. It's just that it's so hard to read with a lot of grammatical errors. I suggest the author to get a beta reader or an editor in the side
Holy Guacamole! This is awesome. I'm getting major Armageddon and and War of the Worlds vibes from this. I absolutely love it! It's a breath of fresh air honestly. Keep it up!!!!
What the actual f*ck happened to this novel? Why did the translator dropped this? Please pick it up again! I have already waited for at least a month for this novel and there's still no updates yet ?
9 chapters in and word padding is already at work. How could he forget that he had Date Trees in his inventory? I mean, does he have a memory of a fcking ant? Also, he eradicated the Jackalans, the original inhabitants of the desert even the children just because they are in the oasis. You know, their own territory!? Also, the MC has the personality of a white slice bread, he tries to appears smart but really, he is just as stupid as the rest of the computer generated people that inhabits his territory. And to top it all off, this was not an original novel but a translated one. Meaning, it is just sh*t chinese novel all in all. I am seeing 5 star reviews in here and I honestly don't get it. Even the worst fan fiction of Harry Potter on this site is BETTER than this sh*t.
The novel is pretty decent, but I am not sure if the author has given up on it releasing. I need to know if I should just remove it from my library at this rate.
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This my fellow readers is great book and i very much recommend it for you. The writing is extremely strong and fluid, the characters are interesting and once you read it, it shall leave you glued to your screen????