Good story. Terrible fight scene writing. subpar overall writing. characters and world can use more depth, the power level of the empire or kingdom can be a starter. Shed some light onto his goals cause your Mc just reacted passively through the 14 chapters I read through. please develop the power scaling better, what tier was the monster he first faced, what can kill him blablabla. Think for a while then continue. Better yet just take some time polishing what you've already written. if you're first language isn't English then have a friend edit for you. Good luck.
Absolutely amazing writing by Andre Parker, pure action and imagery and very consistent biblically, just love it!!!!
The next big thing I promise ?great story and love the characters
Review after 1st part of 2nd game endedNOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time!The good:- Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic.- Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!!- 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role.- Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good:- Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective.- At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed.- With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters.One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.
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I promised a review after ten chapters and we're here. Well, I have to say, I'm impressed. I'm loving this story, the world building, narration and Kieran ??? The dude is relatable in so many ways. Kudo, author
Not much has happened so far, but the writing quality is really good, keep up the good work mate.
"Really Sir? So I was not a homo even though I'm homo? I knew it." Mr. Sangefull answered panicly.
"Let's watch human shows, but not in the magic box, we go to the location directly desu."
Okay, I eat my food right away. "Hmmmm."
How about family?
"Ifritz, I already told you desu, you called my name in a wrong spell, the right is Kaenjieeeeee! Desu".