sick characters ,brilliant world building that is nicely spread and not all info dumped at once and good mc.also fig the magic and abilities
The writing is good, updates come often and the background makes sense, although some stuff is hard to understand. What I dont like is firstly, the cliché of the arrogant young masters. I cant seem to escape it no matter what I do. Besides, Its not the Middle Ages anymore. They should be at least a little smart. Thats probably the main reason I left this book. Whenever there are young masters involved, the clichés follow.
noicee but i was wondering when will author did a new update because I am excited to know what happened! i understand the author is busy so take your time!
|| This review will only be limited to volume 2 as I will wait for volume 3 to continue reading.|| Writing Quality [ 3 stars ]: Somehow, the amount of errors got worse in volume 2. It did improve around the middle of the volume but just enough to be on par with volume 1's quality. I hope the author could improve his writing because it is the only reason preventing me from calling it one of the best original story I have ever read.|| Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: At the start of the volume, the release rate is a very consistent 2 chap/day. But in the later stages of the volume, it became highly unstable [ 1 chap/2 day -- 4 chap/day ]. It's fine with me since I pretty much binge read the entire volume anyways :)|| Story Development [ 4 stars ]: I thought that the story by volume 1 is interesting but the author never ceases to amaze me as volume 2 brings the story to a whole new level. The few flaws in my opinion are: Ellena is finally getting her much needed time to stabilize her emotions, but she still acts nearly the same as she did before though. The few middle chapters when the time skips happened are especially boring to read. I felt this part could've been better.|| Character Design [ 4 stars ]: The low rating is due to the poor description of the members of the 3rd generation group ( the author did state a reason for this ). In my opinion, introduced characters should always be related to the main story and therefore needed to be described better in order to increase the sense of immersion in the story. Because this lack of description, the scenes they are in became hard to imagine, making the chapter feel bland. The design for the other characters in the story is great though, I can't wait to see more.|| World Background [ 4 stars ]: We're finally introduced to more of the world, though I feel the description for some of the places are a little bit lacking.|| Extra opinion: I might've judged wrongly at some point as I'm very tired at the moment of writing this review due to online school. Anyways, the 'main' plot about demons have finally start to unfold. You should definitely try this story out. Again, I shall wait for volume 3 to complete before reading to avoid cliffhangers :v. || Total score: 3.8 stars
Honest review (Ignore the rating)Also, pin this author.Alright, where should I start?The writing quality is fine. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's readable. Updates are perfect and sometimes go on a hiatus but that's fine since all authors do that. The story pace is perfect, though it leans on the accelerated part a bit. The designs of the characters are alright and the world background is gradually explained at a pace you are able to understand.In my opinion, I say this is a great novel. The first few chapters (Probably around 30 chapters) are very meh, but they provide handy information. After that, the story gets better from there.That's pretty much it...Also, the smut chapters are very enjoyable... if you know what I mean...
Hi author here I hope you check out this book and add it to your libraryI tried giving a reasonable rating so please tell me if I'm correct
good novel, there is some potential ?? waiting for the next chapters ......................................................................................................
interesting novel to read......pretty good and nice...??????????????????????????????????????????
I love this story Heesha it has every wording in the right place I also love LSR ??❤️❤️??? wait to see what he and his cat will accomplish together because I have a feeling that cat is something else ??
Although 2 chapters weren't enough to judge a book, I can tell you that this is one of the good book. I like it very much, I think you should try it. Have fun reading :)
I did not read this book but the synopsis says it all. You want to avoid talking in the past tense when writing a novel. Also avoid switching between them in the same sentence
He really changed.He really changed.He really changed.He really changed.He changed. I don't know what to say but the personality changed