So far so good enjoying the read. Just wish updating had a regular schedule and more chapters.
With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.
This is a surprise after surprise, I can’t wait each day for the 1 new chapter? my .2 miss in a all 5 is that I want more chapters??? the characters have great charisma and I can’t wait for more for them. Happily awaiting more chapters??????????
the current path of the book looks good, even though some chapters are average but the overall flow is good so am I enjoying reading this book till now
So he was not done yet too?
But if my mother made it, it become fried chicken-Lvl max (Extremly rare)
"Oh really, well I need to rest also, its been a long day, goodnight" i said and stood up.
Ryker-"lord gulian, charge in and draw the attention from the enemy archers , if possible break down the castle doors down"
Nonchalantly Red Arrow does "Nice move." he says with a slight scoff as he walks towards her. Artemis releases the drawstring, and stands up, "Almost made me believe you are Green Arrow's niece," he says a resentful tone to his words as he stops before her. "though we both know you're not." Artemis glares, "Still, I'm sure G.A. and Bats had a reason for lying, so your cover's safe." he leans down and into her personal space. "But I warn you: do not hurt my friends." he practically growls, Then walks away.
no one knows about Sophie's father real identity..
Langsung
"This place serves as a memorial for the members who had been lost during the long war. In some cases, their actual remains are lying here. In other's the markers are just symbolic," the old man explained. "This area is permanently cut off from the outside world. The space itself is particular shifted into another dimension, so that a normal person could not stumble upon it by accident."