I wanted to know if you were planning on releasing chapter again soon it’s been a long time since we’ve had steady chapter releases
Chapter 4 currently:The concept behind this story is good but the execution is subpar at best. The main flaw that the author has is that they rush through things too quickly. Now let’s get to the main points:Writing Quality: Barely readable. As stated earlier, the author rush through things and doesn’t give characters any type of emotions behind their actions. This make it difficult to understand characters and the action they take.Story Development: There’s barely anything i can say here since it’s just the start.Character Design: This is a bad one. Currently, characters have no personality whatsoever. Actions done by them make no sense. Take the “neglected treatment” for example, I doubt that the main cast would allow things to get that far, especially naruto who has been a victim of such thing. World Background: Literally everything revolves around “Root bad, Danzo bad, Mc and his family are treated badly, woe be me” and it’s annoying. Not to mention how flawed the backstory of the ocs are, Root agents are literally brainwashed till they’re blank state. Danzo is not a character that can trust anyone with that type of information or power. And even if somehow the ocs backstory are somehow true, Danzo literally have failsafes on his root soldiers. I doubt he’ll let the father live since he knows so much.
review is heavily bias because i have read others and this cant stand up to those in comparison even though i would rate them 3/4 stars.this genre is starting to be overdone
it's basically I can create perfect accidents but more descriptive on the gore but I must admit I like both stories so that's nice although it's very similar to the point that it's very ridiculous to
I’ll be honest! I don’t know if is a original work or a translation but the story is good if you leave behind all the mistakes in the translation or writing??I have been reading a lot of MTL stories so I don’t Have problems reading stories like this one!Give it a try ???
There are so many plot holes in the story, the story development is good but I think 2 stars is enough.########## ############____________ _____________....... ....... ....... ............... ....... ....... ............. ..... ..... .......... ... .... .......... ..... ...... ........................ .................. ....... | | ....... ####### _______________ ---------
Raw link plz.….
great grammar*check* Nice build up *check* Great plot *check* Me adding to library *check* Over all great read so far and can't wait for more
Feels too much like a drama for my tastes. On a positive note, this is one of the better 'simulation' type novels out there, though it still isn't great, due to the lingering system elements.
I often didn't read these kinds of things, but this one caught my attention. The way you describe everything is too captivating. I wondered if this all was real.heheHowever, it was enjoyable to read
I know this novel is below average but can you guys stop saying that Qidian stole someone's work. They didn't stole it they bought the copyright licence to translate it in English. Man some anime fans are stupidest beings alive. Lmao, the amount of toxicity Qidian has to face just for bringing out official translation.
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