The concept behind the story itself is good. But the mc is shown practically as machine whose only job is to eat, sleep, train and dungeon run.. and close to no human interaction. Writing quality is average to say the least as many grammatical mistakes and wrong usage to words can be seen. well, for story development there is nothing of a story only a sort summary of his background and what is now then he just goes around training and dungeon running with no human or world interaction... Character design. . . well, at least the characters that author had given importance to are well described and designed but later in story i got the feeling that the story is all about mc dungeon running with no outside interaction.update stability.. .i don't know about this... World background well, it is well described but as we progress only mc's home, motel and dungeon becomes readers world because nothing is told or happens with mc in relation to that. So in short if you want to read a novel where mc just focuses on getting stronger with nothing else in mind then go ahead. (well, after many chapters some world opening happens with mc but still it can be considered negligible interaction with outer world)
I'm hooked on this story! The characters are beautifully designed and the plot is really starting to take shape. ? Can't get enough of the amazing character designs in this story! ? This story keeps getting better and better! Loving the way the plot is developing. ?
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author desperately tries to be funny but it goes wrong every time.MC is just machine that sleeps , nothing else. And this is a blatant copy of another novel .
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Really not my cup of tea. It tries to do too many things without successfully doing any of them. It’s got low level low effort comedy, low effort cultivation, and sincerely low effort world building. What makes this book fun? The passives and how they play out, of course. So what does the Author do? Everything else but. And when he does talk about the passives and the system, it feels reluctant and rushed. Why name the book after that if you just want a face slapping, low tier, Cultivation World? Not for me.
I saw that this novel didn't have any "real" Review so I'm making one to help you chose whether to read it or not First of all I'm only at chapter 54 so I may make a new review later Pros:1-There will be 7 girl in the harem or something like that (it may be a con it depends on what you prefer) 2-The MC have a space and time affinity so he have space and time ability which are really badass (he can gain ability when he lvl up and can lvl up his ability) 3-the MC isn't completely stupid (but I wouldn't say that he is smart either) 4- the world has a lot of potential even though it isn't really original the author describes it well in my opinion but there is still a lot of mystery and things we don't know about the second world (even first world we only know about the district where the MC live but the world look really interesting) 5- the system is nicely done and the reason for the XP gain and lvl up is really good compared to other gamer system6- he won't leave any of his woman behind and all the women will be important for the story (the author confirmed it himself) 7-no ****** (it can be a con for ****** lover lol) 8- there's only a few grammar mistake (I find the grammar above average compared to other work on this platform) 9-the MC become more ruthless later on (I suggest you to read till chapter 48 at least) 10-the R-18 chapter are greatCons:1-this is a harem (this can be a pro and con it depends on your preference) 2-till now (chapter 54)the MC's relationship with the girls isn't that deep (there's way more smut than romance so it may feel like the MC just **** a woman and directly go to the other but the author said that he will try to balance the romance, action and smut) 3-super mega duper incredibly strong plot armor (not in a fight but with the girls) 4-the MC isn't stupid but sometimes relie too much on the system in my opinion5-no ****** (it can be a con for some ppl) 6- the MC can be somehow naive sometimes7-cringe alertSo in my opinion I wouldn't say that this is a masterpiece cause the storie still have some flow and isn't that original but I still think that that's a great novel and a lot of ppl wouldn't regret spending their free pass and coin on it (I suggest you to read at least it chapter 48 cause I find chapter 43-48 the best so far there will be a lot of explanation and action)Chika gif cause she's the best girl:
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