Okay book.
What I like:
Writing quality is good. The quality is consistent and I'm enjoying it.
But, it could add with some more description.
Story development is good. It's pretty interesting. I like how the system doesn't give him everything (read to find out) and how it's not completely cliche as the Mc was the 4th strongest of the world.
But it could get rid of some of the cliche elements like: Archehon causes trouble, Archehon wins, Archehon goes back to do something else. But seeing how the author is a newbie, I'll look over it.
Character design is okay. Could definitely improve a lot on describing them since it's hard to know how they look like exactly.
Updating stability is something idk. since I started reading this after the break. (I hope the author comes back from the break since I'm enjoying the book).
World background is amazing. I like some of the unique ideas and names the author comes up for the abilities and heroes. This is by far, my favourite element.
Overall, decent book. Before I rate it again, I need to get more chapters. :D
This might be my favorite novel that I've read on this platform. The writing quality is very well done, characters have personality and life to them, the plot and setting is very interesting, and is all around fun to read.
The main character is incredibly well written, and the contrast between his new life and what he was before is so fun to see, along with how that causes him to react to the world around him. The other characters also seem well thought out, and the dynamic between him and his sister is great.
Very few grammatical errors, and overall an amazing book!
it's a shame that webnovel keeps butchering these great novels with bad translations i was looking forward to reading this novel
What can i day its a Fresh story haven’t read anything like it and it keeps getting better
I need this system, I've read so many webnovels my stats should be at +1000 by now..........................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
your writing quality is very good. I like it very much. your synopsis is very eye catching . Seriously the first chapter got me hooked. keep it up and update more.
Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.
It's honestly a really good book. It's pretty funny which is a plus so yeah. There are some translation errors though, so do beware of that.
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-12 chapters in-Another novel with a main character who should be OP right off the bat but is stifled by various rules and regulations. The mc has 1 unique aspect and thats his “infinite domain”, which sounds cool but just means he can continuously expand his territory, like every other god in every other novel like this. Except, for them, it’s just assumed they can expand there territory and they have another unique trait, here it’s his only unique trait.There is essentially no world building. We know of a forest, city, and a town ridden by plague. We know nothing about the worlds size, structure, or history. what is mentioned is not described at all.The mc is supposed to be the first god on this planet but for an unexplained reason, he’s late 3000+ years and Is significantly far behind the rest of the gods.Theres no character development. The mc has no goals or aspirations. He probably has some but the author doesn’t tell us a lot of things, like the other 60+ gods are all familiar to the mc and how, maybe, many people from earth were transmigrated. The first girl he meets is one dimensional and takes an interest into the mc for no reason. The family that worships mc aren’t described and they have no personality.The pacing of this novel is odd. The mc is setting up his personal followers, going to school with, I assume, only the goal to get stronger, and he’s learning about his place in the world. These three major plot points will be discussed multiple times within one chapter with very little actually being achieved.
Interesting enough to recommend to be translated. MC isn't stupid, and the opposition isn't stupid either. Of course, that is only until chapter 40, so maybe the story will get worse. I would definitely people read this story though.