Literally amazing. Actually realistic and intelligent- The main character uses his system to gauge the world, understand difficulty and make deductions.If this doesn't get picked, I'll revolt.
1 star yes 1 star because in the description of the novel that he was part of a scheme that doesn't end well and as the story begin the synopsis is put as a future event and I don't like that the future of the MC is already decided.
Okay, I'm hooked with the synopsis. I can get that you've already have a great world background. It's a potential great shounen storyline, with lots of adventures. My only suggestions is about the description part, I find it difficult to understand, that some parts may be a bit confusing. I'll suggest the author to have some re-read or proofreading to make improvements.P.S. I would keep on reading, if I find something, I'll comment so you'll make improvements.Keep it up!!!
This is Brandon Gould the writer of the Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a Review Swap i sent to you a while agohere is my review:i read all of the chapters aviable and i enjoyed it, my overall impression is that you have taken a lot of influnce from The Walking Dead and other Zombie like media and trops. with are not a bad thing when writting a Zombie book. but this is my opion if you stay to close to what has already been done before then that will not make you stand out from other Zombie/apolpose books. with again using things like the father and dauther. Twins/ may or may not be like the ones from the walking dead, saving the pepole that might be bitten at a place where the group is getting food or suplies. maybe its just what i got out of it. but i did enjoy it what was here so far, i am just giving you a suggesten on something that i would do since you are rewritting it anyway.
I read all 60 chapters and I can confidently say that there is no cliche in this novel and the mtl is actually readable with 459 chapters and it feels natural. It’s is What Is The Experience of Becoming a Vampire? and you can read it at comrade mao.
I feel like there is a lot of fog inside the chapters. I can not understand all the strange stuff and events.It doesn't feel like a mystery but more like a puzzle.