the story is like ***extra's guide of survival***. but also has its'sown uniqueness I hope story will take a different route going forward
nice book...............................
It's not my usual genre but trying this book really fancy my interest. It's amazing how you write this book. I'm not only enjoying reading but also learning from the writing style. Keep writing and continue the story.
Hi mateI just finished reading your book and was blown away! Your writing is incredible, and I couldn't put it down. As someone who's passionate about great storytelling, I had some ideas pop into my head about how to take your book to the next level and share it with even more readers.Would you be open to hearing my thoughts? I'd love the opportunity to discuss them with you!
Author let me tell you why you boycotted your own story at first for the early chapters, (I read until chap 27)can't speak about later chapters since I haven't read them, the wish thing is too big of a way to ask for power or destruction or whatever, the story's title is too big most of all when he doesn't get a speck as omniscient as I and many thought, I didn't want him op, but to me he feels too weak for what he asked, I can look past all that, very minor problems at the end if the Mc is good and interesting , that is the problem, you made reading him spiritually painful , he is very stupid, by plot if i understand and that is bad because reading what an idiotic character does is very irritating, you didn't even tell us why, you should have explained that clearly, maybe with a system window that he couldn't see at least then I would have had a reason to continue but you gave him the worst possible handicap being stupid and you gave the reason 50 chapters later?!!!? If you make a character like that and expect people to bear it for 1/4 of the story then I am sorry but I am out if you made him physically very weak but perceptive and cunning and with a helping secondary character (his sister, his cat, etc. ) that could help him fight and carry out the plans he strategizes it would have been an entirely different look but as I said you gave him the worst possible trait, making reading him insufferable
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
The next big thing I promise ?great story and love the characters
This is easily one of the best novels ever!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its suspenseful and surprising and you can never guess what'll happen next! This is one of my first novel and I did not regret reading it at all!
This is the definition of perfect in my words
Of course, I'd give my work a biased 5 star rating. Apocalyptic world background ✅️Interesting Plot ✅️Good characters ✅️Action ✅️This is something I created years back and refined over time, so it is well written if I do say so myself. It is going to be quite the roller coaster. I don't want to spoil things, but feel free to ask me questions here. One thing to know is that MC doesn't mean what you think it does.
it's not that bad for someone writing your first novel ?u200d? keep the good work
Keep in mind, I'm an extremely harsh critic, due to the massive amounts of novels I read. From the first sixteen chapters, I am already invested. The only problem likely is the lack of clarity revolving the personality of Alchemy. We need to see more social situations to amplify our understanding of her. Not to the point she's predictable, but to the point we legitimately love or hate her as an individual based on our own ideals and hers. My currently unofficial wife: Faded1Fate, I tell you this:Try to use her thought process to answer these questions to make her more vivid, some of have already been answered:Is Kill Or Be Killed a good concept? Would you kill before threat has been shown if you believe a possibility of damage could be demonstrated? What if someone isn't physically endangering the country, but instead destabilizing it? Would execution be an option? At what point would it be?Would you manipulate your allies for the sake of your people? What would be your reaction if you realize that one of your allies has overturned the alliance? What is your ideal partner? (Compatibility question, not legitimate romance)Could you be angered to a point of destruction? Would you mercilessly kill a nation if they left your nation on the verge of annihilation?Just how smart are you? Academically wise, logically wise, psychologically wise? (Academic refers to the subjects - math, science, blabla. Logically is using logic to decide things. Psychologically is manipulation, and using people)Are you afraid of your strength? Would you kill a former ally who's actively trying to kill you?