The beginning is a pretty good, very well-written novel. Has great pacing, the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Keep it up.
I mean it's still good but the amount of chapters uploaded keeps getting lesser and lesser and it's getting kinda boring because of that Even if you are updating less chapters atleast update them everydayso it does not get boring
Please leave the package by the door. Thanks!
A good start. It's slow but it's okay . Author is taking his times. The only thing it's lacking is character interaction. But I think author will surely improve it.
I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well!I’m a passionate Commissioned based digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art.I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts. I also have been transform a script inspired by your story.Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality, and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on Linktree and on Deviantart.Further. Feel free to contact meon discord: emily_jamess_ My Twitter ( @EmilyClair_)Hoping for a positive response. Thanks
The amount of depth given to the main character feels like first hand experiences of a time traveling phenomenon. As he struggles with his own struggles, he constantly reminds himself the future isn’t necessarily predetermined. The character growth feels natural and I look forward to more. Recommend others give this one a read.
"Well…If I pass on, I only have the option of going to hell…There was this rule that anyone who are involved on making a pact with demons would go to hell… Who would want that? As far as I've heard, Hell is an un-ending flames with worms swarming everywhere and enters to your body…Blegh… and… if there's a chance for me to go to heaven, I would like to take that chance" Rose said as she smiled
The girls ran towards the bus stop and stopped to catch their breaths. They smiled at each other and laughed. The bus stopped in front of them they climbed on board and went to the back to sit. During the ride, they talked about which classes they have during the day and what they're going to do after school.
I knew you can do it, even if I was not there, I feel like I could hear you singing all over here. You fought hard for this, and I'm doing the same thing too, for you, Caleb!
But the meteor men beg to differ
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Hey now, you're Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me