Markogolas7Jr
Such a hidden gem! I wish more people are reading this amazing book, I love how author writes the story and how it evolves just to be more and more awesome
Dear author~san as i'm Saying "i want to become strong to return to my mother or whatnut"! Then this is i always saying on my previous comments on his/her story that "unintentionally"deleted...i keep on waiting the reply of the author or other reader to enlighten me if i'm wrong or harsh on my words but that's how i feel when the mc is strong then why are feeling bad about other's if you have goal/s! And what's on irking me is he will give them a favor for what he did on their kingdom for killing it's people!? Why not kill them to gain bio-points or etc. That you need to become strong then you can came back to your mother as soon as possible.their are alot of worlds to explore, and this too the part the most annoying if you want to have connection, friend's, or to have a partner to talk to why didn't you wish to have a human form of shin godzilla of your choice?The story is greatThe character's are great too The world backgroun is tooThe story development is amazing i cannot deny it but why you cannot even reply to my comment!? Then you can enlighten me
We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you(Give you up)(Ooh) Never gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye
What a piece of work???I love how the author came out with a great idea???This will surely be in my library to read. Highly recommended guys, you won't regret reading it❤️Kudos author more chapters to come???
It's a really a new concept, and I like it a lot!! The world development has been pretty unique so far and so have the characters, but I really want to read more of this novel!! Please more updates!!!!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Very different and unique book with very good realistic villainous character. writing quality very high, suspense plus story build up and background is very interesting. characters arw written properly not giving the idea that they are forced or 2d.
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a very good novel, glad I discovered this story right now. like you already know this story contains mature content, that's also one of the reasons I read this and I'm quite sure many other readers also read because of this matter. firstly, the plot is good not all about ***, but still for me personally, author the proportion between normal chapter and *** was not that much hope the author can increase and make it more constant like 18-25 normal chapter to enco.unter *** chapter. also hope author can make it kinkier and full fill our reader's fantasy, after all, it's the point of writing and reading a fantasy novel. so far ****** with the aunt is already hot . but mc need other like cuckold other powerhouse/enemy, duo sister and many other fantasy ??
The story is easy to follow. It is not hard to read, but there are a couple of spelling mistakes (might have been mixed by now). I like that the novel updates weekly. The time waiting isn't that long, but it's just enough to keep the tension. It also doesn't put too much stress on the writer and he can stay creative that way. The story progresses at a good pace. The end of each chapter always makes you wonder what will happen next. The characters are a bit plain. Sometimes it's hard to recognize the reasons why the character does a certain action. There are also a couple of times where the character says something that no one would ever say and that specific situation. The world where the story takes place doesn't get described that much, but enough to visualize something and that's really enough. Overall, the book is interesting.
This is self promotion please don't attack me..........................................................................................................sorry for the dots i had to put 140 characters
more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more updates please i super love the story
