Ich mag die Story sehr also bitte weiter so und wen nicht werde ich traurig den solche Geschichten sind richtig toll mein großes Lob an den oder die ersteller erstellerin
Hmm. Rough. World building needs help, character building as well. A bit forced overall.Editing good, but needs more captivation to appeal to a larger audience.
SIS?YOU AND LIL BRO NOT FORGET WE HERE RIGHT?????????????????????????????????⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐??????????
I'm not good at making a review or opinion. This story is absolutely wonderful and nostalgia. Keep it up, Author!!! I recommended this again. Don't ever hesitate to read this. That's all :)
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