Ok, this is great, I would have said more, but I'm in haste to go back to reading
It’s a solid story and definitely an entertaining read, I think one of my favorite parts of the story is mainly the plot. I love the world characters, definitely worth reading.
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Very enjoyable read, mc is strong and unpredictable, few cliche scenes and very creative plotline. Grammar is near perfect and carachter design is definetely the best part of the novel, every heroine and extras have their own personality and reasons for their actions.
Don’t know why there is a villain tag but so far the story is great!The dialogue between characters feel realistic and smooth while each character still retains their original personality.The potential is absolutely huge, keep it up!
The character's design are the good point in the novel. Exactly Noah and his siblings. It gave me a feeling that they will be a strong person in the future. After that, the background also not bad. I guess the world that author wrote will be huge.
We can see the influence of several novels in this story and it still have its own originality, its in fact a good reading.
The story is narrated in the point of view of the MC with very unique since I cant remenber any other.
The only flaw I have to point is that the author is stingy with the details. If the story take a few lines to describe events like how the magic awakening occur or when he enter an place discribe it briefly the novel will be even better.
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I catch myself peeking if there is an update few times a day .Really well written great grammar and the story is smooth and gets you hooked . ...i really hope that the inner monster situation will turn up to be domination of stronger will (kinda like in bleach )anyway cant wait for what will author bring .(I'm really loving it so I'm gonna stay with "author" till the end)
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Ok I love the design of your character I also like the development but this is actually just my opinion but I think that some parts are rushed and some parts are kinda missing some details but overall it's a wonderful story
Reading review on this app is starting to make me fear about people standard of webnovel if you think that trashy novel is an original story or a great story or whatever bullshit i read.... Please i really beg you to start some really good novel like Lord of the mysteries so you can have some standard (1 stars because i can’t put 0)